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Color of Ink
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Color of Ink |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Colors of Ink I often think in shades of ink In black, in red and blue. In countersink and doublethink In utter false and true. In shadows and in fantasy And sometimes scheme ahead. But never doubt of ecstasy Especially in bed. I haunt the chasm of the why For answer that are new. But only wind up with a sigh And double back on do. Sometimes I hyperventilate Fly off in quite a state. But most, I wait and wait and wait And just, gesticulate. But never, ever, wonder far, My love of you and where you are. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah our Sy....you gesticulate....I percolate... and then I bubble when I read your work... well done Sir! |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Seymour~ wonderful....  SEA |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Sweet and tender. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~Smiles~ enjoyed it Sy ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
Wonderful write. I love the tone coming out of this piece at the end. My compliments. "Close your eyes, and you'll see. Cover your ears, and you'll hear." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wave thy hands to and fro but from this poem all should know that when your pen hits the page the colors of ink are explained in the most poetic fashion!! Very well done Seymour!! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
love this.....very very honest and real |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Wonderful poetry, only from you The ending is quite beautiful Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Thank you my pecolatig bubble. *L* Sea, Thanks for the wonderful. Vas, Thanks for the sweet and tender. Nakd, Glad you enjoyed. Secret, Thanks for the compliment. Ethome, Thanks so much for the well done. Jellybeans, I love jellybeans. Elizabeth, You are writing wonderful poetry again. I'm so happy for you. Sy |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Within the colors of your pen's ink flows the crystal clarity of shear poetic flavor and beauty. Superb write sir and very much a piece to find inspiration in life through. |
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