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Beki
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0 posted 2001-02-27 05:44 AM



Down shaded pathways
in the cool of the day
a peahen struts.

Barnyard animals
laze in afternoon quiet;
suddenly...childsqueal!

Here in the zoo
no animal beckons me -
I am drawn to water.

Monkey habitat
rush of the waterfall-
I see only ducks.

Looking for birdlife
in their lush sanctuary,
mouse crosses my path.

My eyes following
I see flashes of color -
Roseate spoonbill.

Bright wind and water
sing through eucalyptus trees -
above their song, cockcrow.

Enclosed together
the llama and the emu,
one stalks the fenceline.

That bewildered cock
keeps on heralding morning -
it is long past three!

QUick monkey chatter
wafts on a breeze through the park -
overhead, a jet.

I find the monkeys
away from their habitat -
they smile from cages.

Children seem taken
with this white handed gibbon -
he chatters back.

Here on this parkbench
surrounded by zoosong
I still hear the sea.



© Copyright 2001 Rebecca Reese - All Rights Reserved
ethome
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1 posted 2001-02-27 06:15 AM


Well done Beki! I have never written in that style but I admire those that do it so well!

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

Poet deVine
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2 posted 2001-02-27 09:16 AM


Beki, your poetry is always so well done. I really enjoyed this one.
Beki
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3 posted 2001-02-27 10:47 PM


Thank you very much ethome and devine
Beki
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4 posted 2001-02-28 02:07 AM


how come these did not move up after I posted? weird...trying again
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5 posted 2001-02-28 12:30 PM


Drawn to water and hearing the sea over the zoo cacophony... I like this very much, Beki!
Beki
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6 posted 2001-03-02 01:43 PM


Thanks a bunch suthern, I spent 4 hours at the zoo and thouroughly enoyed writing this actually I had some 30 haikus and pared it down to these as the best.
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