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jellybeans
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0 posted 2001-02-26 10:51 AM


ok, this is not for everyone, but I know there are some here who have been here...and it helps to post it..so here goes...sigh


Menopause Monday

I am a foreigner in my own land
I can hear the natives speaking
their voices echo in the pain in my head
I waive my arms wildly
to get their attention
I want to make them quit talking
I want to make them understand
I want to scream that my body hurts
no explanations will make it better
it just hurts
but they are looking at me with that
maybe if we don’t say anything she will be quiet and go away look
and I want to put my head in my hands
and cry and I wish
it was Tuesday
instead



© Copyright 2001 jellybeans - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-02-26 11:43 AM


I've had a rough 4 days, and I aint touching this one with a ten foot pole.

loved it though

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


JLR
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2 posted 2001-02-26 11:51 AM


Well...I'm not there yet but thanks for the warning! This is great!
jellybeans
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3 posted 2001-02-26 12:01 PM


smiling@ten foot pole.....and yep, its probably a good idea...maybe I should buy my family a set *g*.....thanks kathleen...some days are not easy huh?

JLR thank you...and well....some have it easier than others...you can always hope

VAS
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4 posted 2001-02-26 12:38 PM


You've only filled me with curiosity. What kinds of pain can I blame on menopause??? Please enlighten me.

Well penned piece, for sure!

jellybeans
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5 posted 2001-02-26 01:17 PM


VAS...well..lol..I am not sure everyone gets the same pains as me, and for sure the doctors look at me like I am looney, but *I* am sure it is hormonal...some mornings I wake up and my hands and feet and eyes....no make that my whole body just hurts, no explanation, no apparent cause...the next morning or so it is gone...sigh...someday I am gonna get it pinned down and find a remedy...... thanks for the comments
passing shadows
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6 posted 2001-02-26 02:56 PM


do I know what you mean!
VAS
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7 posted 2001-02-26 03:32 PM


Hmmmmmm, well, Jellybeans, if I don't keep taking my generic Alleve, in about 3 or 4 days I hurt so much and am so stiff I can hardly move. Of course, I haven't tested it lately. If you'd like to know some more I'd like to tell, e-mail me.
Celeste
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8 posted 2001-02-26 06:00 PM


The bare honesty in this piece is wonderful. When you can reach that level, you shine, and you my friend, definitely shine!!!!!!!

"The secret of change is to focus all of your energy, not on fighting the old, but on building the new.

Socrates

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9 posted 2001-02-26 06:06 PM


Aw, hon... this one just flat out hurts with a pain of body and spirit. I'll hope that Tuesday is a better one for you... but more than that, I'm wishing weeks full of Sun(ny)days for you!
serenity blaze
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10 posted 2001-02-26 06:08 PM


c'mere and give me a hug...sigh...frigging hormones! and? me...I wish it were Wednesday...sigh.
jellybeans
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11 posted 2001-02-27 12:33 PM


dreamkeeper, thank you, your compliments make me smile from deep inside

suthern...yep...you always read me right...sigh...and its tuesday and not much better...and sun(ny)day is way too far away...thank you lady

serenity...yep, lets hang on to the hope that wednesday will be better.....thanks for the hug

inot2B
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12 posted 2001-03-04 06:16 PM


I was just wandering in the back pages and your title jumped out and hit me right between the eyes.
Menopause, means men you better take a pause before you say something you will regret!!!!!

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