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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2001-02-26 07:36 AM

A Canvas of Words

Each time I write, I fly a flight,
Into shameless of a kind.
Each time I face a canvas white
It’s a challenge to my mind.

My bristles brush the brash of day
Trying to force a kinship.
I rage within the interplay
Just to link a fellowship

Confront the dragons in his lair
Face their rage, known and unknown.
Daring fire bluster and flare
Well into the blacker zone.

Oft they play among daffodils
Offering me bland fantasy.
Other times its bile and peril
Snorting fear and agony.

But write I must, it spills the brim,
It’s more then wile, more a whim.

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2001-02-26 07:51 AM

Well, here is hoping it spills the brim in a constant flow. Wonderful write sir and please continue to enchant us with your words and fulfill that whim.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2001-02-26 07:59 AM

Sy,
this was just brim-ful of magic.
write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-02-26 09:47 AM

Sy...I wish I had the talent of your artistry...for I know the push and pull of my demons....

Packratmike
Senior Member

since 2001-02-25

Posts 632
California, USA

4 posted 2001-02-26 12:11 PM

Some poems are fun to read and and a pleasure to pick at....little colorful snips here and there can add so much flavor and you've done it. Kinda like picking at a pizza with all the toppings. Thanks for a nice read

"HEY, DON'T THROW THAT AWAY, I MIGHT NEED IT SOMEDAY!!!" Packratmike

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

5 posted 2001-02-26 12:18 PM

Yep, I understand that spill over the brim.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2001-02-26 05:23 PM

Mark,
Nice comment, thank you.

Kethry,
Cute comment, thank you.

Sunshine,
You have plenty of talent. *L*

Packratmike,
Amusing comment, thanks

Vas,
Thanks allot.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2001-02-28 09:59 AM

I look forward to every flight, Seymour... for you never fail to fill the canvas with perfection. *S*

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2001-02-28 03:16 PM

Suthern,
Wonderful comment, thank you. *L*

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