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Saxoness
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since 1999-07-18
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Texas

0 posted 2001-02-26 04:38 AM


Dear you,

Do you ever feel like
crying when the sun
comes up and I'm not there?

Do you ever wonder
what I'm dreaming about
across the sea
in my own bed
while not with you?

Do you stop and think
about how amazing it is
that you and I can be
so incredibly
compatible?

I do.

So the question is,
how do I write a
letter to the one
I love?

Do I tell him he
makes my toes curl?
No no...
I'll tell him my tongue
twists around his name
tying it's self into
love knots.

I'll tell him
about the fact
that dreaming doesn't
compare to the real thing.

How do you write a letter
to the onw who loves you?
I don't think you can,
you just have to
love him back.


"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

© Copyright 2001 Angela Erin Burke - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2001-02-26 06:21 AM


Saxoness,
I love the last line, so true
Write on
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-02-26 06:41 AM


Congratulations you sweet thing!

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871
Minnesota
3 posted 2001-02-26 05:32 PM


Angela...this is amazing. I agree, loving him back can be the best thing you can do. Congrats on the 1000 as well.
Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
4 posted 2001-02-26 07:40 PM


That last line says it all. Nothing to do but that and enjoy every second of it when you do. CONGRATULATIONS on your 1000th post.
Voiceless
Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind
5 posted 2001-02-26 07:53 PM


The last line is
so great and beautiful!


~*Peachy Be*~

Sven
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
6 posted 2001-02-27 01:07 PM


Wonderful. . . you always manage to see things that are hidden. . . and bring them to light. . .

Congratulations!!!!!



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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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