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CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

0 posted 2001-02-26 02:42 AM

Cloud of pearls
trail darkened skies
Amid the silence
of loveless nights
Breeze of damp
filters dreams
Alone in dwindling
twilight sleep
Beads of tears
dance in pirouette
Upon the velvet
touch of flesh
And still a mystery
does remain
How in a journey
one has came
To take in breath
of new beginnings
Banishing sorrow
no more this feeling
Resting now
in surrendered repose
Like seductive petals
of fragile rose
The truest symbol
of love we know
In precious bloom
of yellow rose
~coco~

[This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 02-26-2001).]

Saxoness

Senior Member

since 1999-07-18

Posts 1102
Texas

1 posted 2001-02-26 03:05 AM

Yellow Roses are my favorites! You described them perfectly

"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

2 posted 2001-02-26 08:33 AM

Not only is this piece beautiful in it's description and imagery but it holds a beauty that would be perfect for sharing a special romantic feeling to someone within the folds of a card. Exquisitely penned my friend and such a treat to find one of yours here today. Thank you for the lovely read.

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

3 posted 2001-02-26 09:50 AM

"The truest symbol
of love we know
In precious bloom
of yellow rose"

coco
girl...you know you should write for
hallmark or american greetings, some
thing along those lines. this is
simply breathtaking poetry at its finest
and i do not exaggerate...lovely imagery
in this...thanks for making me smile. you
are a special friend/poet.

take care
amy

"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words."

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2001-02-26 12:52 PM

Wonderfully descriptive, Coco and the photo/painting is awesome!

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

5 posted 2001-02-26 02:40 PM

how beautiful Coco....what a wonderful description and image you share with us.
excellent my friend.

((hugs))
Charisma

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

6 posted 2001-02-26 02:48 PM

AHHH,

I really loved this Coco - very soothing for me.

Michael

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

7 posted 2001-02-26 09:15 PM

of fragile rose
The truest symbol
of love we know
In precious bloom
of yellow rose"

Coco-
A wonderous bloom. Beautifully penned.

Poeminister

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

8 posted 2001-02-26 09:29 PM

Coco ... this just sings. Music to my mind this evening, so wonderfully flowing and descriptive!

Best wishes,
/Kit

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

9 posted 2001-02-26 10:40 PM

Coco~ I am with everyone else....this is gorgeous.....a Hallmark Card in the making!

SEA

Red-uni
Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 192
Georgia, USA

10 posted 2001-02-26 11:56 PM

Hi,
Enjoyed your poem very much...love yellow roses the best.

Red

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

11 posted 2001-02-27 01:27 PM

My dear PoetFriends, I want to thank all of you for reading this and commenting as you have done and you may not realize it but your words do touch my heart...

Hugs2uAlways
~coco~

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

12 posted 2001-02-27 07:17 PM

PoetFriend Coco. . . indeed this is very beautiful. . .

wonderful words from your heart to ours. . . thank you. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

13 posted 2001-02-27 10:04 PM

Sven
merci beaucoup

PoetFriend

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

14 posted 2001-02-28 03:09 PM

Beautiful poem with so many lovely images... and the picture just adds the Ahhhhhhhhhh... *S* I like this very much!

Elizabeth

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Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

15 posted 2001-02-28 03:33 PM

Coco, this was perfection....roses will always be true symbols of love and you have captured their essence here! The graghic you have is the best complement to the poem....awesome work.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

16 posted 2001-02-28 03:49 PM

Enjoyable to read...James

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

17 posted 2001-02-28 03:56 PM

Coco I can't say anything more that hasn't already been said except that I agree this is a beautiful write...I thoroughly enjoyed the mellow flow........ethome

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

18 posted 2001-03-08 12:55 PM

Suthern, Elizabeth, James, Ethome...
I apologize for my tardy reply and I want to thank you, PoetFriends, for stopping by to read this lil rhyme and I hope ya know your comments have always brought me to smile...

I truly do appreciate the friendly embrace you share with me here

and I guess I should pay better attention in follow-up with the poems I may post here

Hugs2Ualways
~coco~

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