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Red Thread And Sprinkles
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Red Thread And Sprinkles |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396
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Red Thread And Sprinkles Red Thread my head. Oh god tied tight. I was a cat fight - won. I have hips,... I have hips and sprinkles! It was honeydew and ashes and red thread all around! She swam then drowned. Poor thing was she. So sad her eyes. Twisting there - fluorescent skies. Now gray. She was ink all seeping. Oh god she's weeping! Too careless tonight - to see. Red thread red thread and sprinkles. [This message has been edited by SpitFire (edited 02-25-2001).] |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
All right Fire! Neat piece! I love it.  |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
I came back to do the bump with those hips and sprinkles in red thread  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hey, this got swallowed without being seen. Awesome write, SF. Glad to see you here again. S |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
Red Thread my head. Oh god tied tight. I was a cat fight - won. I have hips,... I have hips and sprinkles! love this beginning.....great stuff here |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
SpitFire--Hi...I really liked this...I'm not sure I understand it...but it caught me with the hips...yup, me too. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
I understand the hips thing and I like that ALOT |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Spitfire, Interesting I enjoyed the read. |
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Red-uni Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 192Georgia, USA |
Hi Spits, Liked it. Are you the spitfire that I know? Red |
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