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Sunshine
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0 posted 2001-02-25 07:15 PM



In my bluest haven
where I have a found a home
never more to wander
never more to roam

come and sit with me, my friends,
lend to me your words, and spin
me a song in literary form
take me to where my heart is warm

in my bluest haven
a close, safe room of content
'tis poetry I'm craving
and where poetic form is bent

so welcome me with open arms
lend to me your poetic charms
'tis so very good to come back home
where our minds are free to roam

so come by fireside, sit, and cheer
me with words, erase my fear
and extend to me a wordy release
and catch me as I fall to my ease...

I'm Home!


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-02-25 07:28 PM


Well, welcome home sweet Sunshine........I missed your smilin face SEA
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jeez you guys, this is a sweet one...........
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3 posted 2001-02-25 08:49 PM


Welcome home! Great to have you back.
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4 posted 2001-02-25 08:52 PM


Sunshine,
A wonderful write and welcome home. *L*

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5 posted 2001-02-25 08:55 PM


This is lovely, Karilea!! Very lovely!! Welcome home!!
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6 posted 2001-02-25 09:09 PM


Lovely write. Welcome back home...

Poeminister


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7 posted 2001-02-25 10:17 PM


Thank you all....I was away for a working weekend...and am SO glad to be home...and back to some wonderful renderings....
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8 posted 2001-02-25 10:28 PM


Karilea~
LOL @ your homesick poetic self !
A WHOLE weekend, you say ?
LOL ! *Hugs* n' *Stuff*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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9 posted 2001-02-25 10:37 PM


Marge...yeah....one of those working weekends where anymore I enjoy that part of my self that isn't poetic....just working past my shy....
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10 posted 2001-02-25 10:39 PM


in my bluest haven
a close, safe room of content
'tis poetry I'm craving
and where poetic form is bent

so welcome me with open arms
lend to me your poetic charms
'tis so very good to come back home
where our minds are free to roam
=====================

you knew if ya didnt post by Monday...
we would come looking for ya
We have to have Sunshine in poetry land
sweet write...welcome home Sun

Strange ... the desire for certain pleasures is a part of my pain.
~Kahlil Gibran~

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11 posted 2001-02-25 10:45 PM


soft lol...I know you didn't REALLY miss me JM....but still, nice to know you hug so well...
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12 posted 2001-02-25 10:51 PM


Hey! I missed you more than they did........*pouting* SEA
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13 posted 2001-02-25 11:30 PM


Hi Karilea...My blue heaven has a special meaning for me outside the blue pages...and now it is even more special...home IS where the heart is!
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14 posted 2001-02-25 11:36 PM


Into your bluest haven may I send you the words....I'm glad you're back where you belong....be it rhyme or rhythum or metered out from songs of heaven it's good to read your pen that brings the creative pleasures of poetry to the forum....take care!!

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

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15 posted 2001-02-26 11:45 AM


Thank you all so very much....your words lift me more than you know!

And Sea....you're too cute...

Martie...good hugs, thank you...

Ethome...bless you....

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16 posted 2001-02-28 09:44 AM


This IS a haven... and you've written well the feelings of relief when we return after even a brief absence. *S* Well done, Sunshine!
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17 posted 2001-02-28 03:58 PM


Kari dear heart I love this one I truly utterly adore it

and I missed you but you knew that didn't you. I know!

Absolutely first class writing love, welcome home you!

Where the fire is warm and friends talk
That is the haven to which I run not walk
Where the touch of minds eases my soul
And poetic pieces make my heart feel whole
Where my sister lives in wisdom and grace
There in my haven I see hopes shining face

It is here that I retreat from insanity
The place where I go to rediscover me
My home and sanctuary here is my refuge
The place where I found my mysterious muse
Poetic Persephony lives within its heart
And from her reach I don't wish to be apart

Love this one dear heart
Take care love as always
Puck



Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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