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CD Member
since 2001-01-27
Posts 101 |
LONELY WATERS ------------- Thousands of miles of blue Separate us from our links Links that we had made With the velvet and silk of love Alone I am never Lonely I am always Think about you often do I Hoping that you would really appear Everything is lonely in this world The wind moves in loneliness The great sun shines in loneliness The leaves rustle in loneliness And so do I cry in loneliness Cry for you Love, That at least once again I may see your face and not be lonely. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
What a heart tugger this is.........  SEA |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Piercing loneliness expressed in these words...you've conveyed your feelings very well in this. Nicely done. Poeminister |
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CD Member
since 2001-01-27
Posts 101 |
Thanks a lot SEA Appreciate it My heart is actually tugging so it kind of spilled out CD |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Yes, a heart tugger. May you find a companion of true comfort. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Like your style--alot! Relate even more. And sometimes, when you're least expecting it...you get that once more. Don't waste it. Well done. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Very nice write, CD...I enjoyed it! Wonderful expression of this emotion! sp  everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips... every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips... |
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CD Member
since 2001-01-27
Posts 101 |
Thanks a lot you guys. I am glad that someone can relate to this: JLR CD |
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