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Marsha
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0 posted 2001-02-25 04:20 PM


This Heart


*~ This heart ~ ~ Hear it beat ~*
Flutters within Calls forth heat
I’ll be faithful until eternity ends
For the past I’ll make amends
In me you’ll find such fire
The flames burn higher
Reach on out to me
This love is free
Feel all this
Taste my
Kiss
*

Marsha




[This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 02-25-2001).]

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Celeste
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1 posted 2001-02-25 04:25 PM


Beautiful! I love the set up of this!
Couldn't help but notice your middle name. If I'd had a daughter last year, I was going to name her Grace.

"The secret of change is to focus all of your energy, not on fighting the old, but on building the new.

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2 posted 2001-02-25 04:41 PM



.,,. .,,.
:Well,done:
'heartwork'
':sweet:'
'art'
':'



nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2001-02-25 06:13 PM


I love it and the gifs you used are perfectly placed *s

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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4 posted 2001-02-25 07:43 PM



Marsha ~ * ~ Grace
Of course it's swell
within your heart
I can tell that
you are just
a spirit
free
*


*Go girlie !
Love ya'
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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5 posted 2001-02-25 07:46 PM



Oh my, this is just lovely with a wonderful presentation!

Take care,
Melissa~

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6 posted 2001-02-25 08:09 PM


Very sweet and nice...filled with heart!
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7 posted 2001-02-25 08:20 PM


Marsha, this is awesome...
Your presentation is exquisite
Your expression is adoring
And in my opinion you've succeeded in sharing a poem I for one shall treasure...

Psst... any chance that you do another one pretty please
~coco~

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8 posted 2001-02-25 08:25 PM


I love the set up!


~*Peachy Be*~

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9 posted 2001-02-25 08:59 PM


Mushy~~~~~Girlie
this is beautifully done
I like the shape very much
It looks like it's hard, without
knowing exactly how
to go about
doing it

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10 posted 2001-02-26 12:07 PM


Splendid job on this Mushy! You got the heart part all set and now you've got to find that forever kiss! It's out there...... be patient! Great job on this one!! Prinny

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

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11 posted 2001-02-26 08:47 PM


nicely done..
Marsha
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12 posted 2001-02-28 04:17 PM


Thank you all for reading this, mainly if not wholely this is a product of Margie girls work and effort. If she hadn't shown me how then there wouldn't be shape here at all, or there might have been but it would have been wonky, very wonky!
Thank you all muchly
Take care love as always
Mushy



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Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning




[This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 02-28-2001).]

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