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dreams. . . (II) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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where am I? I'm here where are you? I'm here where are we? in a dream in a dream how did we get here? I've always been here you mean I found you? yes yes now what? I don't know about you but my dream's just come true true ---------------------------------------------------------------- [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 02-25-2001).] |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
sven........dreams DO come true.....helen |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
You got into my blackberry brandy didn't ya?!?  Actually, that's very true. Dreams do come true, when we want them to. "The secret of change is to focus all of your energy, not on fighting the old, but on building the new. Socrates |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
They can come true.... Felt the undercurrent in this one Sven. Let's hope we all find and live that dream!!!!! Isis *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sven, Like I always say, "Hold your dreams close"...This was beautiful. Love, Elise |
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CD Member
since 2001-01-27
Posts 101 |
Dreams are the burning embers of hope when we don't have them. Love the way you portray the importance of them CD |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Very delightful! I had no idea what was coming. Superb surprise! |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
OMG, Sven---I read you all the time but rarely know how to respond. I'm not so good as you are at this! But this...I know exactly what to say...we are living in a parallel universe. Thank you!!! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow, excellent presentation and *sighs* I love the last few sentences  You were destined to be a romantic!~Take care, Melissa~ |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
This likes me. Well done. Poeminister |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Sven, this poem is so dreamy.  |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Geesh...I like this. Gives me the feeling of two people alone in some moment where all there is..is a place just waiting to be discovered. |
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NC Member
since 2001-02-20
Posts 89 |
i like the originality here, Sven very enjoyable! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I really like the lay out of this one Sven. Love the content as well...great write! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
enjoyed this soothing read too |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
And how much do we need to make our dreams come true? Not so much, yet so hard to achieve. I have been thinking perhaps a poet cannot be happy in love for too long. It could ruin the writing..(Though I have seen some notable exceptions here). Keep dreaming, maybe the answer is right there, soon to be found.. Love this, my frined. Sandra |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I love it when dreams come true Sven, may yours always come true for you friend. *s* Enjoy life...this is NOT a dress rehearsal. *s* |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Loved it, great set up, read it like dialoge. Now what? Well, one day you'll find out! A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
as hannibal used to say in A-team "I love it when a plan comes together ~S~ - most cool my friend |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
~keep dreaming like this, it's most beautiful to read~... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thanks to everyone that's replied. . . dreams are where we begin. . . always remember as Elise said. . . to hold your dreams close. . . and always believe that they can come true. . . dreams don't die. . . we kill them. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
We need to dream awake....I think. Kathleen Blake "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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mystic requiem Member
since 2001-01-26
Posts 144 |
This poem seems much like a game. And I for one...enjoyed it. Thanx for the smile! *S*   |
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