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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Uptight Virginia Salter permanent ink pen paper of onion skin wadded up washcloth lying in the sink dirty socks under nose kinks in the garden hose “Have a nice day, Joe!” whether you’re from Kokomo white shoes on a muddy rainy day white socks or slacks oh, what a price to pay automated help lines that run 24/7 chattin’ with a machine is a long, long way from heaven  milk cartons with a thimble full of milk dry clean only stuff made of ‘spensive silk lots of things in this ol’ world set one on edge, lead one to hurl what makes you uptight what sticks in your craw shall we have a contest would it be a draw © August 29. 2000 |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Well I know if we had a poetry contest, you would win hands down against me. This was a delight to read and such an unique way of expressing yourself. I enjoyed it deeply. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Well, Mark, I DON'T THINK SO! but, LOL, I meant a contest of Pet Peeves, heh-heh. Thanks for the wonderful thoughts, though. |
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