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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-02-25 11:47 AM



Holding Hearts
~*Marge Tindal*~

Forever ~*~ faithful
you will always remain
in this heart,come again
enrapture & encircle yet
the whole of me - caught
in such quilted delight
bringing love to stay
the night - spent in
dreams of you this
day-cannot wait
for sun to
fade
*~*
*




~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2001-02-25 12:13 PM


Very beautiful, Marge!!! Soft and lovely!!!

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2 posted 2001-02-25 12:14 PM


You could write about anything and still have a picture for it Lovely write

~FKA Maria Byrne~


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3 posted 2001-02-25 12:37 PM




,love.this,
sweettender
`hearthold'
`Ilove'
`U'

Sweet and beautiful!

Poeminister


[This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 02-25-2001).]

Mark Bohannan
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4 posted 2001-02-25 12:49 PM


FOR ME??????? Well, what a wonderful surprise my sweet friend. You shouldn't have but I am glad you did. Very beautiful words from you and of course, shape, shape, shape........I think we should all go through a whole week of nothing but shape poems just to see where it would take us in creativity. I think I could do it just because I had such a great teacher. Lovely piece my friend. In style as well as content.
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5 posted 2001-02-25 12:55 PM


Beautiful layout, Marge, and I love the phrase quilted delight.

Awesome!

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6 posted 2001-02-25 01:00 PM


Denise~
Thanks for feeling the softness of this piece.


MoonDust/Maria~
Ahhh ! Thank you.
My mind takes pictures of my heart.

PoeMinister~
Awwwww ! So sweet.
Thank you.

MarkB~
Yes !
Just cause you're soooooo ADORABLE !
LOL ! You graduated shapes at the head of the class !
Love you~

VAS~
Thank you so much !
I also love the quilting !
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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7 posted 2001-02-25 03:14 PM


Margie girl this is truly fabulous. You are so creative and always always deliver a perfect piece that delights me. Gorgeous work.
Take care love as always
Mushy


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning




[This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 02-25-2001).]

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8 posted 2001-02-25 08:21 PM


MarshaGal~
Glad to see it inspired you to do your thang !
LOL @ us !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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9 posted 2001-02-25 11:28 PM


Marge, this is so beautiful to read and your presentation in the shape just makes this a treasure of a read...

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10 posted 2001-02-25 11:42 PM


Sweet creative and beautiful as only you can do Marge. I love the simple honest beauty that you exude with such clever arrangements....take care ethome

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

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Marge~ you know, I love when you combine creative art within your poetry masterpieces.....I love this....very soft and full of anticipation..... SEA
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12 posted 2001-02-27 12:00 PM


"bringing love to stay
the night - spent in
dreams of you this
day-cannot wait
for sun to
fade"

yes yes yes - it is how I sleep - very beautiful m'lady

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13 posted 2001-02-27 12:15 PM


what a lovely poem Marge....you have a kind heart, it never fails to show....


Greeneyes~


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"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
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14 posted 2001-02-27 05:36 AM


WOW! I am very very impressed a beautiful poem taking beautiful shape from the beautiful heart of a wonderful poet.....BRAVO!
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15 posted 2001-02-27 07:33 AM


Dani~
Thank you bunches for the sweet reply.

ETHome~
You always make me feel that I've shared something special.
Thank you.

SEA~
You are such a dear !
*Hugs* of appreciation.

Wilfred~
Always glad to know you've enjoyed.
Thank you.

GreenEyes~
Have missed your sweet smile.
*Hugs* to you.

Beki~
I appreciate your reply very much.
Thank you.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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16 posted 2001-02-27 07:51 AM


Your beauty in both presentation and wording is a delight to view ... simply lovely Marge!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Marge Tindal
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17 posted 2001-02-27 07:32 PM


Kit~
Thanks with a *heart-hug* !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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18 posted 2001-02-28 12:21 PM


Love the title, love the poem, love the shape. *S*
Marge Tindal
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19 posted 2001-02-28 02:24 PM


SuthernGal~
Love ya' right back ! !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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