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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Every second, Every minute, Spending time with you, feels like a heaven sent you to me, Every single moment, Wnen I am with you, you touch , Like a flower grows, Single moment with you, It Is so real, When you say every word, It Is true, I believe every word you say, I like it to spend a moment with you, Because your love Is so pericous to me, When you will be away, I will be thinking of this moment, I will never forget this moment, And I will treasure this every single moment, I will fold this petal of this rose you gave to me, I will put this petal on my book, Whenever, I will open this book, And take a look at this petal, I will cherish every single moment, I was spending lifetime with you, Every single moment, Single moment, [This message has been edited by vandana (edited 02-25-2001).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
And with each moment of this beautiful poem comes the sweet smell of love and dedication to the heart. Wonderful write. I really enjoyed this read and it's purity of heart. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
That's love, posted beautifully and pure! A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Vandana Lovely sentiments. Enjoyed the read. Poeminister |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the nice thing about single moments is that we can put them all together to make lifetime. . . wonderful vandana. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
vandana, Beautiful moments my friend.  LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this vandana....James |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Every second, Every minute, Spending time with you, feels like a heaven sent you to me,' Beautiful write, vandana! Love it! sp  everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips... every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips... |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
A sweet poem! ~*Peachy Be*~ |
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