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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
This love of mine, it's crazy. It's an obsessive love. I just can't walk away, from your addictive touch. It's then I realize, that all I need is YOU. You when I rise, You are my sun. You when I cry, You are my pain. You when I smile, You are my joy. And in our long hours of passion. I realize again, that all I need is YOU. You in my silence, you're with me. You in my goodtimes, that You give. You with your love, You let me be. You only You, it's all I need. A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Hey, I been there before. Wonderful piece of love here and you have a great way of showing your heart and the longing that lingers when even one moment passes between time of seperation from the one you need to be with. Great write. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Walker, This is wonderful to read!! It's so full of sincerity and tender feelings....very much enjoyed this poem!! Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! [This message has been edited by Sunnyone (edited 02-25-2001).] |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
walker, What a beautiful way to profess your love for someone special. This was soft and sweet. Very nice writing.  Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
walker- very lovely and touching poem. a wonderful way to say "i love you". truly enjoyed reading this. take care amy "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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