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Aimster
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0 posted 2001-02-25 12:18 PM


~nirvana~

heavenly peace reaches inside my heart
freeing my soul from all pain
this one moment of perfect happiness
allowing me complete joy

for one moment
a reunion with Heaven
losing myself
in this one moment of sublime

oblivous to what is around me
just letting go
feeling the Wind around me
as tears of happiness rain down my face

realizing for once in my Life
i am free
free and alive
as i float back down
upon wings of an Angel

Amy M. Kennedy


"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words."


© Copyright 2001 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-02-25 01:12 AM


It's great to read your words these days!

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Janet Marie
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2 posted 2001-02-25 11:00 AM


heavenly peace reaches inside my heart
freeing my soul from all pain
this one moment of perfect happiness
allowing me complete joy

for one moment
a reunion with Heaven
losing myself
in this one moment of sublime
===================

after reading the very touching "Missing You" and then this beautiful revelation...
Id say youve been talking to Angels ...
and that your finding your self in the answers.
beautiful reflections Am...
yes...she is always with you ...and shes very proud of the woman you have become...
you are the reflection of her light
love ya girlie
me

Strange ... the desire for certain pleasures is a part of my pain.
~Kahlil Gibran~

walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida
3 posted 2001-02-25 11:40 AM


Its good to be alive! Lovely expression of happiness found.

A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26
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Regina SK; Canada
4 posted 2001-02-25 11:45 AM


Beautifully expressed moment of release. Enjoyed the read.

Poeminister

Sven
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5 posted 2001-02-25 01:13 PM


and this is how we learn. . .

wonderful Amy. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

snowpants
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KS
6 posted 2001-02-25 03:00 PM


'oblivous to what is around me
just letting go
feeling the Wind around me
as tears of happiness rain down my face

realizing for once in my Life
i am free
free and alive
as i float back down
upon wings of an Angel'

Just beautiful, aims...what a wonderful expression of quite a feeling, for which I cannot find the words, but you did! And quite well! It's great to see you so 'free,' m'friend! You know I love this!

-e ~~~~~~~~


everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips...
every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips...

Voiceless
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Under the stars upon the wind
7 posted 2001-02-25 03:08 PM


I love Angels....I like this poem very much!


~*Peachy Be*~

Celeste
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Posts 597

8 posted 2001-02-25 04:17 PM


Oh beautiful!!!!!!! You have so captured what I've tried so hard to do this last year......capture the moment, live the moment. And that can actually be so hard to do. You've expressed it beautifully! Lovely, Amy!

"The secret of change is to focus all of your energy, not on fighting the old, but on building the new.

Socrates

Marsha
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9 posted 2001-02-25 04:54 PM


Amy dear heart, this is utterly truly fabulous. This is truly nirvana, and yes you've been speaking to angels love. Utterly first class.
Thank you for this one love it is an absolutely beautiful piece from you
Take care love as always
Mushy



Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
10 posted 2001-02-26 12:14 PM


I think you're an angel yourself Amy. You're writing some great stuff!! This is very very good!

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
11 posted 2001-02-26 01:52 AM


A pleasure to read...James
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