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Open Poetry #12

Don't You Hear Me

ATelamon
Member

since 2001-02-06

Posts 328
Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up

0 posted 2001-02-24 09:49 PM

Calling calling near screaming
in my ached wound for you
......need I rend the World
turn it upside if only
for your acknowledgement
No one can be that much in Love

That is what my high counselor
astrologist and mage agree upon
plans save withcraft non-floating
Denizens clammy walls they are all
Yea that really gets to my No-sense
Not-so-funny bone shhhhh always agree
It surely must inspire adherance yet not
The child of innocence but carriers plague

That no human has the tonic for as if we had any to
light lives through this quaffed misery we call life

"What days are these, that make life a bread casket?"

"Decisions are Dominoes. Pause to reflect, before you set them in motion.

[This message has been edited by ATelamon (edited 02-25-2001).]

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-02-24 10:04 PM

This reads very well.......I like it, but admittingly, I don't know exactly what you are trying to say here......still, it sounds neat.

SEA

Celeste
Senior Member

since 2000-11-11

Posts 597

2 posted 2001-02-24 11:30 PM

Haunting, aching, strong writing. Brought tears to my eyes.
Sometimes the gentlest touch can lead you home. Open your heart to it. It's there.

"The secret of change is to focus all of your energy, not on fighting the old, but on building the new.

Socrates

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