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Alone Again To Cry
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Alone Again To Cry |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“ALONE AGAIN TO CRY” by Bill Charles ~~~~ We thought we would try again, but it didn’t work, all the things we once had, were just too long ago… I remember the times, when we were so very close, wonder what happened, where did everything go… We held hands, and we could talk, way back then, and now there are many things, that can’t even be said… I learned how hurt and pain, could become best friends, as I traveled around the country, straightening out my head.. So now it’s over, many years, but not down the drain, for I still care in my own way, just not like before… I really don’t want to let you go, as I see your hurt too, but I can only say right now, it’s you, I still seem to adore… The night that just passed, seemed like one million years, and I lie awake this morning, after saying a tearful goodbye… I know my towel is so very wet, perhaps it’s because I’m here, “Alone Again To Cry”… ~~~~ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
BC~ this is heartbreakingly sad.......so so sad.........the way you've expressed this sadness, is fantastic!  SEA |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
Sad and moving.. ~*Peachy Be*~ |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Sometimes you can't get back what was lost. This is so sad. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Your poems are from somewhere deep in your soul. Let the memories be laid to rest. With the change of seasons its time to start afresh. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
 ..feeling this... relating much to your words...very wonderfully penned... is true..sometimes theres just too much water under the bridge for things to go back to what they once were...and even tho you love each other still, its just not the same love..no matter how deep it is... hugs, g "there is no BEST in a world of INDIVIDUALS..." "FORGIVENESS is giving up my right to hurt you for hurting me..." |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
And once it's lost, there isn't any use in trying to get it back.......this one hit home, my friend!! Great job, as always...... Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
February seems like a sad month Bill...I know what I'm going to do...going to a Karaoke Club and singing "The End of the World" by Skeeter Davis. I can really connect with that one right now...James |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
This touched me deeply. I think there are often times that both don't want to lose what they've had and sometimes it is just too far gone. And that love never really dies, it only changes, just a little. Beautiful Bill. We seem often to share alot of the same feelings. "The secret of change is to focus all of your energy, not on fighting the old, but on building the new. Socrates |
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Palpable Rose New Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 3Ohio |
This moved me, very well written |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Bill, your poem touched my heart poetfriend... ~coco~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
yes, this one was very moving, Bill..well written..huggzz ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA - morning, and yes, sad indeed. One way to get it out is to write about it, I would hope anyway. Thanks SEA, always nice to see you. Voiceless - thank you for coming by. Poet deVine - so true, I now know that it will never come back, as before. inot2B - thank you for the kind words, and yes, I do believe they come from very deep, in my soul. dgvarner - I believe there are many that would feel this. And to relate to these words that I have written, is to know my feelings. So much water has flowed, it takes on a flow of it's own, never to be returned, or stopped. Thank you very much for coming by. Sunnyone - so true my friend, so true. And please, send me an ICQ message! JamesMichael - this month must be a sad one, and I pray I never see another like it. I would love to join you in singing that song. dreamkeeper - well, sometimes it is too far gone, and one must do what one must do. And you are understanding in saying that love never really dies, it just changes. I also noticed that the sharing of feelings are mutual. I do like your writings, they say a lot, and have much meaning for me. Send me an ICQ message, if you would. Palpable Rose - welcome, and hope to read some of your writings. Thanks for the kind reply, and look forward to seeing you again. CocoBaci - hello my friend, glad that I wrote a little something that touched your heart. Nice to see you, and thanks for coming by once again. nakdthoughts - nice to see you, and hope that you are doing well. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
heartbreaking poem enjoy the read |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
So sad... can relate. ~FKA Maria Byrne~ |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Bill Your words are very sad but true. May you find happiness and remember the good things that happened and not the bad. Ariana |
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CD Member
since 2001-01-27
Posts 101 |
This one is already breaking the happy barriers I have made up to live, springing leaks of tears that I don't want shown. Amazing write CD |
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NC Member
since 2001-02-20
Posts 89 |
how beautifully touching this poem is... genuine feelings expressed so well feelings, so many can relate to i'm glad i stopped by to read this one, Bill |
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Taffetta Junior Member
since 2001-02-26
Posts 27 |
Your words are so very sad and I can relate to them. Lots of hurt. I am glad I stopped by. Taffetta |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
vandana - thank you for coming by, and I'm glad that you enjoyed this writing. Moon Dust - thank you for reading this, and for your reply. Ariana - You are very correct that one must remember the good times. Yes, I do agree with you. Thank you for coming by. CD - Hoping that you have a smile just now, but tears do have a way of showing up out of nowhere. And I can relate, about not wanting to show them. Thanks for coming by my humble place. NC - I'm glad that you came by also, and I do thank you for a warm response to this writing. Thank you. Taffetta - Thank you for coming by, and I am glad that you did. Yes, many sad words and many whom can relate to them. Including myself. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Hugs BC....just a big hug..... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Bill, how beautifully you have expressed a sad time in your life. Thank you for sharing it with us. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
As you can tell, your pen has written words from many of our hearts... This is beautiful in its sadness. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Greeneyes - thank you for the hug, at times one is very appreciated and needed. Dee - and I must thank you for sharing your kind words with me. suthern - thank you so much for the words that you have written here to me. My pen perhaps has captured many hearts that beat the same sadness. Thanks again. |
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