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walker
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since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-02-24 08:28 PM

It swept in like a thief
in the night, her aroma
proclaiming the dizziness
in my head. Dancing rings,
juggle in my mind. Tossing
and turning around it. Her
smell, went right thru my
heart, it conquered it like
never before. Impregnating in
you and my soul, her scent forever.

A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-02-24 08:43 PM

wow.......this is awesome

SEA

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

2 posted 2001-02-24 08:46 PM

Well done!

~*Peachy Be*~

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

3 posted 2001-02-24 08:49 PM

1derful!...enjoyed the read.

Poeminister

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

4 posted 2001-02-24 08:57 PM

Well...after I read this a dozen times more...I'll try and come back and tell you just exactly why I love it, 'cause I do.

Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

5 posted 2001-02-25 01:00 AM

Very nice poem!

Nathan

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

6 posted 2001-02-25 01:19 AM

Ah, that power of scent! The searing brand in the brain! You've captured the intensity!

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

7 posted 2001-02-25 01:23 AM

this............is wonderful......helen

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

8 posted 2001-02-25 09:24 AM

Thanks you all, for your support.

A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

9 posted 2001-02-25 10:55 AM

I always look for your work, as you have such a way of painting with your words!! This one is wonderful....such a little thing as a person's scent can stay forever in our memories....thank you for writing this!!

Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

10 posted 2001-02-25 03:15 PM

Yes, a very wonderful write, indeed, walker! Scent can be quite overpowering...love this!

sp

everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips...
every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips...

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