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walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-02-24 08:23 PM



Let me breath, your windless air.
Peacefully I want to be, in your
arms I know I'll find only victory.
Risking it all, to be with you.
All the while, knowing that you
will not withstand the wind when
it blows again.


A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
Celeste
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since 2000-11-11
Posts 597

1 posted 2001-02-24 08:26 PM


You so often leave me speechless in your writing. This is excellent. I'm saving!

"The secret of change is to focus all of your energy, not on fighting the old, but on building the new.

Socrates

Voiceless
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since 2001-02-19
Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind
2 posted 2001-02-24 08:37 PM


Thank you very much for writing this
I enjoyed it very much.


~*Peachy Be*~

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada
3 posted 2001-02-24 08:42 PM


I like this... well written.

Poeminister

walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida
4 posted 2001-02-25 09:22 AM


Thanks, for responding so positively.

A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

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