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Missing You |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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I sat on the sand today Watching as the waves crashed along the shore So peaceful and serene The only sound was the ocean's roar The sunlight on my back Blue skies filling my eyes As I cleared out my mind Just sitting, and I cried Some days I think of you and smile Others I think of you and cry But always I am thinking of you My angel in the sky I could use your wisdom now Your soft and touching way How I wish I could bring you back And forever make you stay I know that you are watching down on me Praying that I make you proud With learning to let you go Peace within myself is what I finally found Today thought was different I needed to hear your voice...to see your face Wanted to be touched by your beauty Your never-ending grace Then it occurred to me softly As my grin became wide That never have you left me Forever, your by my side So Mom if you are listening Please just now how much I love you You are always in my thoughts I carry you with all I do If your ever near earth again Please send me a little sign You're both my mother and my friend But for now I let you go...till we meet again Amy M. Kennedy 2/24/01 "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
listen. . . wonderful Amy. . .  ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading your poem Amy...James |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Amy dear heart, She is proud of you This I know, how could she not be proud of you love. This is as always an absolutely fabulous piece of writing from you, full of heart, full of your love for your mum who lives above. Absolutely first class Ace piece love Take care as always love Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Tender and very touching, our loved ones live on in our hearts and memories forever. Take care Olias. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Wow, this is very beautiful and heart-touching Amy....you're a very sweet person too...may peace be with you and very good writing! Nathan |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Today thought was different I needed to hear your voice...to see your face Wanted to be touched by your beauty Your never-ending grace Then it occurred to me softly As my grin became wide That never have you left me Forever, your by my side' 'If your ever near earth again Please send me a little sign You're both my mother and my friend But for now I let you go...till we meet again' Oh, Aims...I really couldn't express to you how this brought tears to my eyes...you have penned something quite wonderful here. And, as Marsha said, she IS proud of you and the honorable woman that you are. This is stunningly beautiful, m'friend!  -e ~~~~~~ p.s. the ocean...hmph...no fair  everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips... every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips... |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Yes its comforting to know thier still there, lovely read ~Maria~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hi Miss Amy You bet your Mum is proud of you girl! this is a beautiful tribute to her and pen it wit hso much feeling. especially loved the line .. "Blue skies filling my eyes" A lovely image my dear. Hugs Maree |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
i thank you all kindly for your sweet and heartfelt replies. i know if my Mom was here--she'd thank you all too so I'll do it for her. My dear sweet friends at Passions, you all know how to soften a girl's day. thank you. take care amy "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." [This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 02-25-2001).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Sunlight on my back,I liked that line liked it a lot |
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