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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-02-24 03:48 PM



At Fever Pitch

Computereyes, can there be such a thing
decoding in error, visions swirling

Round and around and it's double I see
at fever pitch, I can see two of me

As in mirror I look, I don't recognize
the one looking back, with the hazel eyes

Feel dizzy, and weak, both hot and cold
is that me, I see, am I really 'that' old?

Someone help me please, can't you understand
I am sick, I think, need a helping hand

Place me back in bed, shut my mind down, too
otherwise I'm dreaming of You!! and You!!

Wait a minute please, isn't that a sin
I'd have two of You, a double, a twin

Just lay me down, on this bed once more
I'll share two of You and we'll be just four

Baby! Like this pitch, this fever I've got
it can stick around, it can keep me hot

Delirious, I am and delirious, I be
'til this fever pitch loses hold on me

~Wynter
**sorry, feverishly out of my mind, once again


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2001-02-24 04:24 PM


LOL..take two aspirin, drink some juice and call me in the morning! LOL Cute. Now go take care of yourself!
JLR
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since 2001-02-04
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2 posted 2001-02-24 04:31 PM


'Delirious' looks very good on you. These are hilarious! Maybe you should think about doing a series. The Wynter of our Delirium.
Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
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3 posted 2001-02-24 05:00 PM


I refuse to let you feel like two people, get some rest and look gorgeous as always when you revive!!!!!!!!

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
4 posted 2001-02-25 06:34 AM


PdV...if only two aspirin were enough this time... thank you

J...The Wynter of our Delirium...cute title may have to think about that..

Kathleen..aw thanks, but if this was Xmas time I could take Rudolphs place my nose is so red.

thank you all..I just thought I would give you a bit of humour.

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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