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NC
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0 posted 2001-02-24 03:45 PM


Before we have our heart attacks
and learn the punch line to life’s joke
perhaps love will find us and strike...

And don’t we both deserve a stroke?

© Copyright 2001 NC - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2001-02-24 04:21 PM


that kind yes..many of them *s

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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2 posted 2001-02-25 02:27 PM


yes!!!!

I love this!! Love the line. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

VAS
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3 posted 2001-02-25 07:05 PM


You never cease to amaze me, NC. Quite the double entendre here. I really enjoyed this, as long as I can pick my stroke and the kind I give.
JLR
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4 posted 2001-02-25 07:14 PM


Do you even know how funny this is? And to both ?'s...mine and yours...YES!
NC
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5 posted 2001-02-25 09:51 PM


heh heh...thanks everyone!
glad you liked this

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