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ATelamon
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since 2001-02-06
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0 posted 2001-02-24 12:48 PM



Insights Introspection
Needful knowing holds keys opens
Visions doorwways lead on to an
Encounter with self in time a
Real oposittion or simply dichotomy mind seeks
Self no matter anniversary or adversarial dreams
Inviting once again inversion can you know asking
Of the who that seem to assign destinies that means
Now and forever you are in contest judged by whom



"Decisions are Dominoes. Pause to reflect, before you set them in motion.

© Copyright 2001 ATelamon - All Rights Reserved
Irie
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since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493
Washington State
1 posted 2001-02-24 01:30 PM


A serious look inside oneself.
Judged by whom? Our selves maybe?

May be that I have misinterpreted this piece.......
this is just what I've picked up from it.
At any rate, I enjoyed your work.




~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"



Celeste
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since 2000-11-11
Posts 597

2 posted 2001-02-24 03:32 PM


Okay, I almost had it......and then at the end it slipped right out of my hands! I shall contemplate.......

"The secret of change is to focus all of your energy, not on fighting the old, but on building the new.

Socrates

NC
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since 2001-02-20
Posts 89

3 posted 2001-02-24 04:07 PM


i am somehow reminded of
"eyes being burned out in the well of Truth"

decisions are dominos, indeed...

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
4 posted 2001-02-24 05:42 PM


ATelemon,
a thought provoking write.
write on
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada
5 posted 2001-02-24 05:46 PM


ATelamon,
Interesting piece...enjoyed the read.

Poeminister

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