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DonFurr
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since 2001-01-01
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Monticello IN

0 posted 2001-02-24 02:06 AM


Quiet again are the paths that lead

To those that have the greater need

I see no future nor see I the past

My life is mine but not even that will last

Soon I run to she that wants me again

She sees all that I have ever been

As the finest prize on a carnival midway

Her outlook as fresh as new dawned day

My curse is as others must be

I must hurt the ones I cannot see

I hurt the more because of your tear

In my heart I hold eternally dear

The love you offered pure and true

From first you typed "I love you


© Copyright 2001 Don Furr - All Rights Reserved
1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
1 posted 2001-02-24 02:31 AM


don......you ARE the finest prize......if any woman doesnt think so they are nuts.......love ya buddy...helen
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2 posted 2001-02-25 02:36 PM


from one Empath to another. . . this is the life that we must lead. . . we are called, and chosen. . . but we know the heart, and we know the soul. . . and one will come. . . to show us ourselves. . .

superb words, excellent writing. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Voiceless
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since 2001-02-19
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Under the stars upon the wind
3 posted 2001-02-25 02:48 PM


I love the way you wrote it!
what a great poem!


~*Peachy Be*~

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4 posted 2001-02-25 04:25 PM


this was gentle and sweet, and very apparent that it was written by a true empath---loved this much.
Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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Victoria Australia
5 posted 2001-02-26 05:14 AM


The empathy in you has touched the sympathy in me.
write on
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



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