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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-02-24 12:48 PM



Circles Of Love
~*Marge Tindal*~
*
~Love~
is the circle
that never ends
the waiting heart
of a needy friend
clasping hands
holding on
forever
~*~
Our sweet
truest love is the
continuous revolving
everturning of circles
in absolute juxtaposed
relation to where we
are and where we
will always be
together
~*~
Growing
into each turn
with grace, holding
just the softest trace
of love to bind us to
this place - until
evermore
~*~
Circles
always bring
me back to you
you stand there
waiting with a
smile and a
~hug~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Rex Allen McCoy
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1 posted 2001-02-24 12:54 PM


well I've definately got a smile and hug from this one Marge
Thanks
Very nice

kcsgrandma
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2 posted 2001-02-24 12:54 PM


Hey, it's not often I get to be among the first to see one of your poems here! And one of the shapes you do so well, too. I like those circles and all the love held within them. But then, can't remember that I've ever not liked what you wrote.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

EagleOne
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3 posted 2001-02-24 02:33 AM


A never ending circle of love, what could be better

"I've done all the dumb things"....Paul Kelly

ethome
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4 posted 2001-02-24 03:50 AM


Marge love certainly is a circle that never ends, no matter how one looks at it. That wonderful feeling that imbues the very core of the heart always comes up love one way or another.....I love this one Marge!

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

Marsha
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5 posted 2001-02-24 06:50 AM


Margie girl, this is utterly truly wonderful, so fabulous that I'm truly stunned
Really lovely, and the circles are wonderful
Take care love as always
Mushy

Did I tell you that I love this one? Because I do!!


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



ATelamon
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6 posted 2001-02-24 06:57 AM


Your format suits your message well. And the message is all that counts.

Well done.

AT

Mike
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7 posted 2001-02-24 11:05 AM


nicely written... wonderful feel good poetry.
Poeminister
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8 posted 2001-02-24 11:06 AM


"Circles
always bring
me back to you"

Beautiful..

Poeminister

Kit McCallum
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9 posted 2001-02-24 11:57 AM


Circles ... love ... hugs ... they all come back to you with this beautiful render. Lovely sentiments and composition Marge!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Janet Marie
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10 posted 2001-02-24 12:30 PM


Growing
into each turn
with grace, holding
just the softest trace
of love to bind us to
this place - until
evermore
===================

this is so sincere and lovely Margie-girl
what a sweet read
love and hugs right back atcha

Strange ... the desire for certain pleasures is a part of my pain.
~Kahlil Gibran~

Nate Dogg
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11 posted 2001-02-24 12:43 PM


The infinite circle of love...a beautiful piece filled with love and happiness....wonderful write!

Nathan


[This message has been edited by Nate Dogg (edited 02-24-2001).]

Meadowmuse
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12 posted 2001-02-24 12:46 PM


Another treasure, Miss Marge. One can always depend upon your sincere words and your unique gift of presentation. Lovely writing, to be sure. Thanks for it. (o:

Hope you are well,
Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


Marge Tindal
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13 posted 2001-02-24 08:47 PM


Rex~
Glad to know the smiles and hugs were received. Thanks.

KCS~
Awww ! So sweet of you to say. Thank you.

EagleOne~
You're such a doll !

ETHome~
Thank you, my friend.

Marsha~
Funny thing - I started out to do something else,
but the circles had a mind of their own.
Thanks, sweetie.

ATelamon~
Thank you for the reply.
Nice to know you enjoyed it.

Mike~
Now THAT'S a real compliment !
Keep up that 'feel-good' feeling !

PoeMinister~
Thanks for letting me know.

Kit~
THe circled and caught me quite by surprise.
Thanks, gal.

JanetMarie~
Bounce back on you ! !

Nate, my friend~
Thanks so very much.

Claire~
Always nice to know you've read and enjoyed.
Thank you.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


Mark Bohannan
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14 posted 2001-02-25 09:48 AM


So since it is a circle, does that mean we get to keep coming back for more and more no matter how many trips we make around the elipse? Wonderful write my friend and so true in it's words........now watch for me, I am coming around the curve just ahead.
Marge Tindal
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15 posted 2001-02-25 10:21 AM



MarkB~
Sweetheart
such as you are
can have seconds
every day of the
week and twice
on Sundays !
~*Marge*~


Psst-double up - it's Sunday ! !


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


Charisma
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16 posted 2001-02-25 11:00 AM


oh you are so right, wonderful warm circles of love
you are realy a warmhearted soul.

((hugs))
Charisma

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
17 posted 2001-02-25 11:10 AM


Is this
what you mean
by the doubling up
in the arms of
someone like
MARGE

finding
my way to the
world of happiness
and contentment
in friendship
with you


[This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 02-25-2001).]

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18 posted 2001-02-25 11:13 AM


Lovely marge, as always

~FKA Maria Byrne~


Marge Tindal
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19 posted 2001-02-25 11:22 AM


Charisma~
Glad always to *{{hug*}} you back.


MarkB~
Kind of what
I had in mind
Hugs n' kisses
are so sublime
Wrap me with
your love
~*Marge*~



Maria~
Thanks for the peek !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


Denise
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20 posted 2001-02-25 09:23 PM


Soooooo lovely, Marge!!
SEA
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with you
21 posted 2001-02-25 10:04 PM


Marge~ I just love reading your poetry, but to see it presented as beautifully as you always do, well, it's a extra special treat! SEA
Sunshine
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22 posted 2001-02-25 10:42 PM


Your
circle of
love is always
extending to those
who want to
learn a bit
more to
craft


and you know who I mean...

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23 posted 2001-02-27 04:52 PM


I love this one lots, sweet hug lady... especially the promise of the last circle. *S*
Marge Tindal
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24 posted 2001-02-27 07:09 PM


Denise~
*Hugging* you for your devotion to poetry ! !

SEA~
I will treasure your reply. Thank you.

Karilea~
*Hugs* to you -
Anytime, lady ... anytime.

Suthern~
Yeah ... kinda special, isn't it ?
You're a doll !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


BloomingRose
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25 posted 2001-02-27 07:15 PM


Circles of love are with you girl! You know how to light up a room!
Love this!
Hugs,
deb

lucky
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26 posted 2001-03-03 03:42 AM


Yeah, baby...

I guess that why God stuck me with you... But it was a good choice, don't you think..?

love, dale



Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am.
To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight.
-Marge Tindal


lucky
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27 posted 2001-03-03 03:45 AM


Yeah, baby...

I guess that why God stuck me with you... But it was a good choice, don't you think..?

love, dale



Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am.
To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight.
-Marge Tindal


Mother_Earth
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28 posted 2001-03-03 12:04 PM


Marge, I have told my grandkids that I love them "O" this much and they used to get upset until I told them it was forever. I loved this and you do such good work!!
HUGS, ME

Kethry
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29 posted 2001-03-03 12:09 PM


Marge,
Circles of love. What a beautiful concept, what a beautiful write!
Write on
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



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