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Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

0 posted 2001-02-23 10:31 PM

Song of Chance

In my bosom plays your tune
my love let us take flight
under the soft light of the moon
up forth to heaven's height

let's dance dance and prance
and make our pleasure loud
sing the song of chance;
let's waltz upon a cloud

And sway away this night
under the halo of romance
where a thousand dreams bright
shall be the beauty of our trance

Poeminister

"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato

[This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 02-23-2001).]

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-02-23 10:33 PM

"let's dance dance and prance
and make our pleasure loud"

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Oh.....I like this very much...........nice.........

SEA

ALIKUTWO
New Member

since 2001-02-23

Posts 3

2 posted 2001-02-23 10:39 PM

I thought you were very brave to write an uner the light of the moon poem. I liked the dance and prance and trance connection and wish the trance connection was closer.

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

3 posted 2001-02-23 11:00 PM

yes yes lets waltz woohoo good one

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2001-02-23 11:04 PM

Oh, you have swept me to the clouds where we dance the night away! Wonderful piece, fantastically fun!

JLR
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since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

5 posted 2001-02-23 11:33 PM

Yes!---Seems the night for it.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

6 posted 2001-02-23 11:33 PM

And sway away this night
under the halo of romance
where a thousand dreams bright
shall be the beauty of our trance
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oh yes... I so enjoyed this tune of the moon.
very cool imagery here PM
and perfect cadence kissed romantic notions
very lovely sentiments
well done poet sir

Strange ... the desire for certain pleasures is a part of my pain.
~Kahlil Gibran~

Meadowmuse
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since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

7 posted 2001-02-23 11:37 PM

K, uplifting, ethereal, lovely.

Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

8 posted 2001-02-24 03:12 PM

Perfect; happy, lyrical, and just wonderful!
Sandra

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2001-02-24 03:21 PM

Poeminister,

Beautifully romantic thoughts. I loved reading this.

LW

Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

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