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Voiceless but yet heard?
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
I whisper to you what i think and feel.. all i can hope is that you read and open yourself to feel To the night sky I may be a dull star But if ever got close you would my true light. You may not hear what i say But read what i write and you may find a point hidden away It makes no use to speak when nobodys listens but if you write and maybe in someones eyes your words will glisten. strike a chord of feelings in someones heart or be ignored and feel yours torn apart. I am voiceless because what can i say that hasn't been heard But write it down who knows what may occur So listen with your heart instead of your head and maybe you can hear what is really being said |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"So listen with your heart instead of your head and maybe you can hear what is really being said" I'm listening........ I hear........and I care  SEA(love this) |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
I hear what you are saying, and I read between the lines, very thought provoking and powerful words. Thank you for sharing. Regards, Olias. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
"If you write maybe in someone's eyes your words will glisten" hi VL, I must say your poem touched a soft spot on me today and my compliments to you for a splendid write and the above quote from your poem is inspiring ~coco~ |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
To the night sky I am a dull star But if I ever got close you would see my true light. I love those lines. Voiceless, yes sometimes is hard for others to hear us, even when we speak, we might be voiceless. Wonderfully expressed! A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Excellent write, Voiceless! Sometimes certain words strike a chord in someone, and who knows what can happen then? Wonderful poem! sp  everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips... every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips... |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Another winner here, Voiceless....very nice poem! Nathan |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
For one without a voice you sure do communicate your message quite well and I too hear you loud and clear. Excellent write and a very wonderful way of expressing the thoughts that sometimes plague us through silent pleading. Loved the read. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
voiceless in voice, but not in message. . . this is excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Voiceless.........wonderful poem loved the lines...... open yourself to feel....... listen to your heart instead of your head and maybe you can hear what is really being said ................... i have a problem listening to my heart....i find it easy to ignore at times........helen |
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