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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-02-23 08:07 AM

Forevermore

Walk with me.
I promise to be silent,
to let my feelings transfer
within hands that hold,
fingers that lace,
bodies that touch as we
silently, mingle our thoughts
in the beauty of the night.

Turn to me.
Look into my eyes,
view the truth in motion
as my face lights up
under the moon's watch
in anticipation of your lips
that move in on me
and brush me with their
everlasting taste.

Be with me.
Know that I am yours
only for this night
but that you hold
within your power
the means to deliver me
to the entrance of your heart
forevermore.

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Celeste
Senior Member

since 2000-11-11

Posts 597

1 posted 2001-02-23 08:36 AM

Oh Wow..........*sigh* Beautiful! You capture this beautifully.

"The secret of change is to focus all of your energy, not on fighting the old, but on building the new.

Socrates

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2001-02-24 03:22 PM

Forevermore, what a wonderful dream..sigh from me, too..
Great write, Wynter.
Sandra

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2001-02-24 04:20 PM

Be with me.
Wynter - I must say this, as they come from the words you have written below. "If you were mine for only one night, I would make it more, than for only that one night."

Know that I am yours
only for this night
but that you hold
within your power
the means to deliver me
to the entrance of your heart
forevermore.

BC

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2001-02-24 05:12 PM

This poem delivers hope and romance...James

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

5 posted 2001-02-24 05:17 PM

Beautiful and sweet...lovely write.

Poeminister

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2001-02-25 06:30 AM

dreamkeeper
catalinamoon
James
Poeminister....thank you all for stopping to read and respond I appreciate it greatly.

BC...sweet response Bill, made me smile through my sneezes..

darn how I hate feeling ill!

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

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