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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2001-02-23 07:42 AM


Flowers and Forever

Time is a growing medium
The soul is the power.
And life could seem tedium though
It’s only the flower.

Some flowers glare a blinding light
And set this world a flare.
Some flowers bloom in dark of night
You’d hardly know were there.

But every flower is a prize
The fruit of time and space
Whatever, large or small in size
It is a given grace.

Enjoy the sands of time in pour
Flowers die in sever
A fain of evermore weather
Vacuous or clever.

And though we hamper the sever
Only the soul is forever.


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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2001-02-23 07:53 AM


beautiful thought ~Sigh~

and some flowers take their time blooming to be more everlasting...

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2001-02-23 07:57 AM


Seymour~
I just love your thoughts this morning.

'Some flowers bloom in dark of night
You’d hardly know were there.

But every flower is a prize
The fruit of time and space
Whatever, large or small in size
It is a given grace.


Yes ... it IS a given grace.
*smiling here*
~*Marge*~


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Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
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Pennsylvania
3 posted 2001-02-23 07:58 AM


A flower is a fragile gift
For moments does its grace uplift
But even when the petals fall
It is the beauty we recall
And so a rose never belies
It is a flower that never dies

Lovely poem
Liz

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

4 posted 2001-02-23 08:54 AM


Time is a growing medium
The soul is the power.
And life could seem tedium though
It’s only the flower.
=========================
But every flower is a prize
The fruit of time and space
Whatever, large or small in size
It is a given grace.

Enjoy the sands of time in pour
Flowers die in sever
A fain of evermore weather
Vacuous or clever.

And though we hamper the sever
Only the soul is forever.
==========================

I see you have been walking in your wisdom garden and it harvested this poem of blooming
grace.
love the premise of this ... the gift of its message
tis a fragrant bouquet of your insight
a lovely rose of your suppose




and ya know ... where there are flowers ...
there are butterflies
*winkiewinkie*




and Liz .. your reply verse is equally as wise and lovely



Love is my religion, I believe in nothing else.
To find that inspiration, live that inner vision.
Love is my religion...I believe in you.
~T Kimmel

ethome
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New Brunswick Canada
5 posted 2001-02-24 04:34 AM


Seymour this is very spiritual at the core. I love this ..."enjoy the sands of time in pour ...flowers die in sever....a fain of evermore weather...vacuous or clever." Well, this is very clever, the entire piece...on the exterior we are all different flowers as there are so many in the fields of nature.... but there is something there inside forever ......GOOD writing!

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

ATelamon
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since 2001-02-06
Posts 328
Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up
6 posted 2001-02-24 06:31 AM


Lovely indeed with beliefs that run deep.

Well done
AT

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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Victoria Australia
7 posted 2001-02-24 06:39 AM


Sy, a veritable bouquet of wise thoughts.
write on
Keth


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



Mike
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since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462

8 posted 2001-02-24 11:13 AM


but why did I end up being a dandelion?
anytways... well written and expressed as always, enjoyed the read...

Poeminister
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Regina SK; Canada
9 posted 2001-02-24 11:16 AM


Love this...beautifully said.

Poeminister

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
10 posted 2001-02-24 10:06 PM


To all the wonderful people above, never thought this would get such a great reception.
I thank you all so much.

[This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (edited 02-24-2001).]

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