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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Word Swirls ~*Marge Tindal*~ Oh, my love so very precious are my thoughts of you laid in total recall of that one special moment when in your eyes I saw the reflection of my love staring staring right back at me stark naked in the desire seeing that all the moments of sweet contentment shine upon my face and fall in the pools of reflected prisms found in the beauty of your smile abounding astounding me with acute knowledge that you encompass all I have ever wanted needed or wantonly desired and I fully understand comprehending that the sum of you is validation enough for equating the total - the exact total of me with more than enough left over to always be just me ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You can't see me, Marge, but I'm bowing to your greatness.... ....and to shape your poem like a bowling pin...WOW! You are every man's dream  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer~ Oh ... wipe that grin off your face ! I can too see you !  And three strikes - you're out ! Oh ... that's not bowling ? Well, how about a rolling pin ! !  Love you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Marge, As always, you impress. Your words a phenomenal and I am in awe of your work. Garfield |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Marge, you've made me dizzy! Loved the idea and the words, beautiful. Dee I wish you every happiness and pray you'll always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading your poem Marge...James |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge, I have to agree with the Deer, it looks like a bowling pin, but I loved the poem within a poem. *Clapping and cheering* Can you hear that? Write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"I fully understand comprehending that the sum of you is validation enough for equating the total - the exact total of me" Beautifully flowing Marge ... both in wording and presentation.! You have many wonderful lines contained in this beauty ... I loved your sentiments throughout. A lovely read my friend! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well this crept in on soft mocassins....and I don't see a bowling pin....a little too curvaceous for that.... well done, White Feather.... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I like your love swirls And delightful phrases Beautifully done Liz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GGRN~ And I am awwww'd by your awe ! Thank you. Dee~ So pleased that you enjoyed it. My muse was swirling - dizzy with busy ! JamesMichael~ Thank you. I like knowing that my thoughts swirled your way. Kethry~ I think I hear the pins falling ! LOL ! You and Deer need to meet me at the bowling alley ! Kit~ Ahhh ! Again - you have extracted what is also my favorite thought. That doesn't surprise me - or you, does it ? *Hugs* Karilea~ Yes, yes, yes ! You saw my exponential curve ! *smiling here* LizzieLady~ I like seeing your sweet smile this morning. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Oh my, this one I save for not only it's beauty but to study your creativity..I love it... huggsss ~Wynter/M "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wynter~ My thoughts flowed freely in this one. I got the inspiration for the decorating from something I saw by Lucky a long time ago. Thank you so much for expressing your enjoyment. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl, this is awesome dear heart, truly fabulous. As I've said before on more than one occassion your ability is utterly amazing. The words certainly swirl and they are so very beautiful, truly outstanding work. Not that I've ever seen anything less than perfect from you, but this is truly spectacular. I love it Take care love as always Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Well now you have me spinning like a top And I don't know if I can stop? Very creative and wonderful write. *L* |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh what a beautiful "spin" you've put on this Marge ~ I can see it swirling in the breeze... soooo lovely! Bonnie |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarshaGal~ You are a dear to shine within my heart. Thank you. Seymour~ Thanks, love. Remember, those who go 'round in circles - will be known as wheels ! Bonnie~ Thanks so much. Good to see you ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Lovely poem, lovely presentation, Marge!!! |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
I love the shape, and the words just make it better! ~*Peachy Be*~ |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
You swirl them most exquisetly. Beautifully done. Poeminister "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." -Plato |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ you are a master of your art.........lovin this, as usual......perfectly done SEA |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
that's not a bowling pin... is it? hehe.. i thought we were all finally graced with seeing YOU!!! and how shapely your words are, ms Poet!! a lovely rendition, indeed.... very well done... i LOVE it! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Marge this is so very creative and insightful. What a great format and you are so clever when it comes to these compositions. I also know like you you say at the end that you will always be you that's what's so delightful! Always so much fun to read your work....take care ethome The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
This is one of your best! I am in awe of your talent. Keep it up, your poetry in art is delightful. Hugs, Deb |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ Thank you, friend. VoiceLess~ I greatly appreciate your reply. PoeMinister~ Awwww ! Thanks ! SEA~ Thank you for thinking so. I fear it's a craft that always needs tweaking. Guess that makes me a freaking-tweaking poet ! Doreen~ LOL ! That shape just 'bowls' me over ! Thanks, gal. ETHome~ In case you feel something - it's me *hugging* you ! BloomingRose~ Thank ya', sweetie ! I do have a tendency to get artsy - cause I LOVE IT ! *Hugs* to all of you ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
As always, Marge, wonderfully creative work! I love this!! sp  everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips... every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh my....this one is outstanding Marge.....glad that I could catch this one. truly more than beautiful and just like Balladeer....I too bow for you wonderful lady. Great Word Swirls ..... (((hugs))) Charisma |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SnowPants~ Thank you so very much. I had lots of fun painting this one. Charisma~ Thanks, sweetie. I love sharing with you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This swirls gently and with great beauty... Well done! *S* |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Has anyone ever told you that your curves could get a man in lots of trouble? Wow......love the way you sculpted this piece of poetic art and as I told you, I would eventually get to it. It just took me a while to add up the sum total of you especially with all those intermissions we took.  Loved the read and always enjoy your talent and artistic approach to life my friend. Love ya bunches. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SuthernGal~ Thank you so much for finding the time to enjoy this one. MarkB~ And a true gentleman of his word you are ! Thank ya', darlin' ! Things are adding up, eh ? I like your calculations !  Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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