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Another Whisper Of Desire
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Another Whisper Of Desire |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Another Whisper Of Desire ~*Marge Tindal*~ One more whisper of desire blows the embers into fire Catching wind of something new branding memories of you Ruffled edges of the flame spark the moaning of your name Roaring warmth, desirous touch, caressing kiss, loved so much Slowly now the flames subside Singed contentment in a sigh Hearts now rest in slumbered fire Wake on whisper of desire Stir the ashes of the fire Embers glow with new desire ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh whew....it just got VERY warm in here.... |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I second that emotion.......hee hee....... Margie, this is very umm....hot......  excellent! SEA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
My oh my Marge girl, you got me all a flutter. Rendered down to melted butter. Lovely lovely. Sy |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i say its hot hot hot i say its hot hot hot |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Oh I love this! Very well written....great way of using the fire metaphor.  |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Marge, I like this one a whole bunch and might I add it's  To my library this one goes sweetie... ~coco~ |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Ooopsie, I forgot to click that link2library... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--You been into the chili??? Can I have your recipe? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ It was here too ! SEA~ Tee-Hee ! Sorry, would have replied sooner, but I was busy putting out a fire ! Seymour~ The very thought of you in a puddle Has my mind all in a muddle ! Love ya' Walt~ You too ? ALRIGHT ! Elizabeth~ Thank you for being serious ! The rest of these characters are sounding the fire alarm ! Dani~ Hope you've got a fire extinguisher in that library ! Martie~ Your wish - is my command ! Chili recipe in your e-mail ! I just love all you wonderful poets ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
...leaving only smoke and ashes baby  very nice Margie-girl... sensual and satisfying love the cadence of this spicy treat this place needed some steam Love is my religion, I believe in nothing else. To find that inspiration, live that inner vision. Love is my religion...I believe in you. ~T Kimmel |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Much heat in here...love it  Poeminister [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 02-23-2001).] |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marge, I just love the way you log on.... This poem soots you very well. I can feel chestnuts roasting... You;re awesome, lady |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JanetMarie~ Well, my friend - It would steam to me that this place just went up in smoke ! PoeMinister~ Nothing like a heat wave ! Balladeer~ Your blaze of phrase is not lost on the hearth of my heart. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
That's the way I always feel when I read one of your poems Marge...."singed contentment in a sigh." Great little passionate work this one is...have you stirred the ashes this morning....whew things could get hot!! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl, this is wonderful, absolutely wonderful, I really love it. Now who's starting fires love? I do like a nice blaze though and I can see you do too Love it take care love as always Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
You really know how to send smoke signals don't ya my friend. This is lovely and of course it translates into some mighty pretty colors dancing in the breeze. Beautifully penned and even more beautiful are the thoughts that accompany this cozy piece. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ *Hugs* Marsha~ Roaring with the blaze here, lovie ! MarkB~ Big *hugs* ... Smoke-signals on the rise !  Love you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This one is worth donning asbestos attire, Marge. *S* It is stunning! I particularly like the phrase "branding memories of you"... it seems to sum up passion... from the heat of desire to the ache of feeling burned when things go awry. |
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Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
Stunningly magnificent! My heart is set afire just reading it. "Death marks the beginning, not the end. It is our journey to God." --Billy Graham |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely and sensual, Marge! Corinne |
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