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The Winter Holds
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The Winter Holds |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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The Winter Holds Whitened heavens seemed to fall icing paths of future thought edges sliding, leaving prints to coat with crystals, glitter wrought. Walked the whitened, felt the freeze refreshments taken in my view swept away, when comes the breeze wonderflakes, this morning new. My eyes beheld a scene of bright amongst my grayness, palmed in hands when reaching out, to capture white to melt the coldness as it lands Upon my cheeks, now rosey red stirring memories, of moonlit stride pacing steps, in each a thought of strolling with my love beside. Spring not far away and yet the winter holds, I love it so. It fires warmth within my soul until the turn of seasons show. ~Wynter this picture won't show on here and I don't know why...so this is meant for my poem... http://www.geocities.com/mmoonchild1/swalk3.jpg "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 02-22-2001).] |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Beautiful........You have such a talent for beautiful imagery and emotion. I just love it! Always enjoy reading your work.  "The secret of change is to focus all of your energy, not on fighting the old, but on building the new. Socrates |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Wynter - again, and what can I say, you write gorgeously. And, as far as winter goes, I believe it would be better in PA, than in AL. Ha.... BC |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
A very colorful rendition...well done!... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
dreamkeeper & BC & Lady in White thankyou for the read, my fellow poets...sorry for the delay in responding *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Naked-- Beautiful imagery and rhyme...enjoyed this very much. Poeminister |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Poeminister thank you for always supporting my words~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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