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Angel Eyes

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JamesMichael
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0 posted 02-22-2001 07:39 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for JamesMichael

Angel Eyes

Silky softness awaits my touch.
Sensual pleasures awaken lust.
Appreciation beckons me.
Admiration enticing me.

A desire to know how angels feel.
Her luscious lips lure and appeal.
I brush silky hair from her face
and pull her close in warm embrace.

I kiss her lips and touch her thigh
as heaven opens before my eyes.
A warm caress and a silky kiss
let me know what I have missed.

Stay with me angel eyes
and share some heaven by my side.
Take me for an angel ride.
Let me see heaven in your eyes.

Jameslee@February22,2001
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Irish Rose
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1 posted 02-22-2001 08:20 AM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

this should be a song, I already hear the music playing! I remember a song "Angel Eyes" but I can't remember the artist. I really liked this one!

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Janet Marie
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2 posted 02-22-2001 09:00 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Stay with me angel eyes
and share some heaven by my side.
Take me for an angel ride.
Let me see heaven in your eyes.
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ahhhh James when you are this inspired...
this is lovely SBJ...
romantic, sensual and full of anticipation
and I like the way you kept the angel theme flowing in this and brought it all together in the last verse with the lines of Heaven.
very well done!!

Love is my religion, I believe in nothing else.
To find that inspiration, live that inner vision.
Love is my religion...I believe in you.
~T Kimmel
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3 posted 02-22-2001 09:02 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

VERY nice....
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 02-22-2001 09:22 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

James,
Very nice enjoyed the read.
Nate Dogg
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5 posted 02-24-2001 10:37 AM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

A beautiful and wonderful write James!

Nathan
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You bring sincerity to a unique level with your poem, James. It is lovely.

Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

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7 posted 02-24-2001 10:41 AM       View Profile for VAS   Email VAS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for VAS

Yes, it sounds like it could be a song.
Poeminister
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8 posted 02-24-2001 10:42 AM       View Profile for Poeminister   Email Poeminister   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Poeminister's Home Page   View IP for Poeminister

Very romantic...beautifully penned.

Poeminister
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9 posted 02-24-2001 10:43 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

ok, now this is definately a song here.........beautiful! Love it when you write like this SEA
JamesMichael
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Thank you all for the lovely responses...James
 
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