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NC Member
since 2001-02-20
Posts 89 |
i sip my drink... touch the glaze on windows with one finger play God change images just a touch makes icy eyes drip water hard faces thaw in streams i sip my drink... fingers numb Godlike |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Oh the ice on the window art.....I fell into this picture all the way...amazing what that warm finger can create....and there you are quite pleased and Godlike......well you should be happy with yourself....I really enjoyed this so much....ethome The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This very 'delicate'..loved the image.  |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Wonderful write and descriptions. Enjoyed the read. Poeminister |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
i sip my drink... touch the glaze on windows with one finger play God change images just a touch makes icy eyes drip water hard faces thaw in streams i sip my drink... fingers numb Godlike" This required more than one read. This is very deep poetry, it's refreshing to read something that makes me think and this truly did. If I could analyze, I believe that would take something away from it, so I won't do that, I just read it over and over.... "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
On the third read I really saw a wonderful message coming forth. This is beautiful, N.C. I'm so glad I popped in before choir rehearsal. Beautiful! Oh, I said that. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Third read...took me several more and I enjoyed everyone. Ain't it the truth. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
NC....what new visions you've opened up for many.... O, well done! |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
This reminds me very much of another writer I know elsewhere...masterfully succinct. Thanks for it. Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Wonderful, N.C.!!!! Have missed your poetry! Great to see you here. Kellie To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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NC Member
since 2001-02-20
Posts 89 |
i won't even try to type all of your names...but i thank all of you for taking the time to read. your comments are much appreciated. thanks for the kind words! |
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