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Amature2
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0 posted 2001-02-21 02:17 PM


"Handle With Care"

Feeling stranded, thinking time has passed on by
With every passing day more tears to cry
Becoming fragile, a birds broken wing
Knowing so well what the next day will bring

Caught in a whirlpool, running out of time
Making the hill much more tougher to climb
Trapped by a force, with no in-between
Kept in seclusion, who could intervene

A heart bruised and battered
Hopes and dreams all shattered
Trusting in someone, so hard to concieve
Knowing the pain no one wants to recieve

Finding the strength, a place for retreat
And as for the past, there is no repeat
With these words coming from a true friend
The time has come for a heart to mend

Still hurting inside, but do not despair
The words being said are "Handle With Care"


[This message has been edited by Amature2 (edited 02-21-2001).]

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Lady In White
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1 posted 2001-02-21 02:46 PM


I like this...
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2 posted 2001-02-21 03:33 PM


you truly make me cry.....helen
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3 posted 2001-02-22 09:45 AM


Hi Amature2,

"Oh" I loved this one, wonderful, going in my library, thank you.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



Amature2
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4 posted 2001-02-22 08:38 PM


Glad you liked it Lady In White,, Thank you

Helen , i hope the tears you cry are happy tears. Thank you for stopping by.

Cerenity your welcome ,,, glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for putting it in your library.

Hurting a heart should be a hate crime
Cause for it to mend takes a long time
Three words for all hearts to share
Place them by your heart "Handle With Care"

Thank you Amature2

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