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Alicat
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0 posted 2001-02-21 12:27 PM


Here I find myself, yes once again
And let me tell you it's a royal pain.
The turbid waters chill me to the bone
As once more I see that I'm alone.
In fecund river I can barely float;
No oars, no rope, not even a boat.
Fetid waters flow right over me
Kept adrift by flatulant bouyancy.
So pass me down some Boston beans;
What saves my hide can't be obscene.
I know this fecal creek's my own doing
By always acting without thinking.


Alicat


“It is not the strongest of the species that survive, nor the most
intelligent, but the one most responsive to change.” Charles Darwin



© Copyright 2001 Alastair Adamson - All Rights Reserved
Irie
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1 posted 2001-02-21 01:16 PM


ROLFMAO!!!

This was a great laugh mister! hehehehe


~Sheri

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left by those who got there first"



Nicole
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2 posted 2001-02-21 03:47 PM


*shaking head*

Oh Ali.

Ali, Ali, Ali

lol

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2001-02-21 04:00 PM


I think and I still get into trouble...James
Poet deVine
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4 posted 2001-02-21 07:10 PM


Hey!!! My favorite RV driver!! Love it.
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5 posted 2001-02-21 07:14 PM


I love how your mind works Ali. . .

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Temptress
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6 posted 2001-02-21 10:14 PM


Well, you're right, yanno. This fits my "say-it-without-thinking-because-I'm-in-a-mood-to-tell-people-where-they-can-stow-it" mode right now. LOL! Sometimes good..sometimes BAD!

Nice writing here, Kitten. I too love your way of thinking.

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7 posted 2001-02-21 10:48 PM


too funny....I've a wee bit of a temper myself...but, what's with the beans? Izzat some sort of alternative energy source?

" Only those who risk going too far can possibly find out how far one can go."
T.S. Eliot


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8 posted 2001-02-21 11:12 PM


I'd say that river is well named!!!! I love alternative energy sources
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