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In The Shadows - Moonlight Dancing
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In The Shadows - Moonlight Dancing |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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In The Shadows - Moonlight Dancing ~*Marge Tindal*~ Swaying branches of the willow among the shadows of the night Moonlight comes in soft array gracefully dancing slivers of light Dancing beams entrancing courtesy of a cloud-split sky Permitting a symphony of light upon the shadows prancing by In the shadows - moonlight dancing upon the skirt of willow twirls Once more round the meadow waltzing as the night wind gently swirls Now with dawning light of day gentle breezes softly play Gracing yet her gentle sway of shadows in moonlight danced away ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 02-21-2001).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
so very pretty and I love this image: a cloud-split sky ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Great poem. the image is not showing up on my screen. Still, I love the poem. Hugs, Deb |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Swaying branches of the willow among the shadows of the night Moonlight comes in soft array gracefully dancing slivers of light =============== beautiful imagery margie. I like the twist you did on this phrase... excellent cadence and flow to this lovely piece. very well done poetess of hugs  Love is my religion, I believe in nothing else. To find that inspiration, live that inner vision. Love is my religion...I believe in you. ~T Kimmel |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Am SO enjoying the revisit of this theme....well done my friend! |
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Puck Junior Member
since 2001-02-21
Posts 14Oberon's Palace |
Marge that's where I belong dancing in the moonlight, and this is divine, it is so beautiful full of images, womderfully written. I'll just sprinkle some on my fairy dust here, to add an extra glow. I like this one, now who else needs some glittering dust  Iam that merry wanderer of the night I jest to Oberon, and make him smile Puck |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Challenge met beautifully..wonderful images and flow in this piece. Very nicely done. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful images, Marge... it leaves me with a longing sigh. *S* |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Marge, entrancing isn't it? Your poetry drew me in and filled my heart and mind with shades of dark and light interwoven in musical form. Lovely...... Bob <>< |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wynter~ Thanks, gal ! BloomingRose~ Yeah ... the darned image showed for me - and I even printed it out ... then it disappeared. I even tried a new upload to my GeoCities server and it did the same thing again. I finally just took it out. I loved the beautiful weeping willow and wish I could have shared it with this piece. Thank you for letting me know and for the e-mails. JanetMarie~ Thanks for noticing the 'twist'. You are greatly appreciated in this lady's heart. Karilea~ I felt a renewed inspiration and am also pleased with the poetry it sparked ! Puck~ You're the greatest ! I'll take a large dose of that 'fairy dust'. PoeMinister~ Appreciate your thoughts always. SuthernGal~ Thanks for letting me know of the *sigh* ! LightHouseBob~ Thanks so much. Glad to have drawn you in. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--Absolutely stunning...and what a wonderful turn of words...I think I like it better. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~Love~ Thank you ... you know me - always looking at the world in a new light ! Love you ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mote Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 31 |
Marge- Beautifully done...you met the challenge very well. Mote |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
I love it! What i love about it so much is the picture you paint with your words it is breath taking! ~*Peachy Be*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mote~ Thank you so much. Welcome to Passions ! VoiceLess~ Such a nice compliment - and I thank you greatly. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Is she really swaying or would you call the sasshaying? Either way this piece is so lovely and your entry into this challenge is met with the tenderness of thought provoke in the simple complexity of nature and I thank you for sharing such a lovely piece my friend.  |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge, what can I say your softer side is so natural and beautiful, you obviously have an affinity for nature and I have an urgent hankering for more of your work, but as I'm off to hiho, I'll carry this in my head. write on moon's song Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarkB~ Hi, doll !  You caught me 'sashaying' with abandon ... Love ya'~ Kethry~ Thank you for such encouraging comments ... I guess my 'affinity' is of a spirit borne of life in finding the softness of all things and within, finding who I am meant to be. *Hugs* ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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