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February 21, Every Year
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February 21, Every Year |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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February 21, Every Year Today you emerged from hibernation. I felt you tapping the shoulder of my memory. Look, you said, I am swept under your heartbeat, sleeping, covered by hours then by days finally by years until my laughter fades and the sound of my voice is lost. I am only noticed when February cuts into your heart or in my picture one sided and posed. You look for me across the mountain top as if my ashes are what seed the ground and I can feel the pilgrimage of your feet upon my soul. Your heart beat is me and the ache in womb the full blue veined breast of remembering is where you can find me and I will always be there trust your tears. [This message has been edited by Martie (edited 02-21-2001).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Your heart beat is me and the ache in womb the full blue veined breast of remembering is where you can find me and I will always be there trust your tears. ========================= yes... and trust in your poetry .. you engrave her beauty in gold with every write ... and you engrave both of you in our hearts. No parent should ever know this... and I have no words for it ... your in my thoughts dear sweet Martie love you  Love is my religion, I believe in nothing else. To find that inspiration, live that inner vision. Love is my religion...I believe in you. ~T Kimmel |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Martie, not a word can I find to express in this reply how your poem has touched me... DearLady, you have a place in my heart... hugs2uPoetFriend ~coco~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ Michelle is such a gift of your love~ Thank you for sharing her~ Hugs, sweet Sister of my heart~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Your walk in this life holds much to the fact that so many of us learn what the true love of a parent is and has to offer and your poetry holds the beauty of her in our hearts closely as we are able to see the two of you forever entwined hand in hand through your heart. Beautiful words and very touching tribute you share with us my friend. Big hugs from the cowboy. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
touching and yes. the trust of tears, sometimes the ONLY thing you can trust in! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Martie, so sad and sweet. Thanks for sharing with us. Dee I wish you every happiness and pray you'll always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Big HUGS Martie...I know they can't physically reach you but I'm hoping the thought can be shared along with the tears. I was directed to a site hosting your poems and photographs of Michelle a little while ago and looked for a guest book but couldn't find one. She's beautiful, just like her mum and she always will be..  Take care...it's a beautiful poem. HUGS |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
You write so beautifully of your love that will always remain within...as you share with all of us her memory... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sending many quilted hugs....and walking that path with you.... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Every time I read this, it touches me more deeply... You're in my thoughts and prayers, dear lady... and Michelle is forever in our hearts because of the love you've shared. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Thank you, my friends for all you loving thoughts...I know I get fixated this month on Michelle...you are sweet to put up with me...hugs to all!!! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Nope Martie, not sweet at all..I actually take great comfort from the way you put your emotions into words..so for me, you post for us all in a way...and I'm glad that you do. Thank you for your email, bless you..been thinking of that mountain all day... HUGS |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
No words hon. Just a huge DOT and many cuddles.  K[This message has been edited by Severn (edited 02-21-2001).] |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
martie- just beautiful and sad. soft hugs to you sweet lady. this moved me to tears... take care amy "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Same month, different date, different reason...nonetheless, it took me back, way back. And I found the pain was less. Thank you for that. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Martie~I don't think at all that you're fixated...but if you were, that's OK.... |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Dear Martie, this mother's heart is crying. This lose of yours is every parents nightmare. Love and hugs, ME |
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