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Hello My Heart
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Hello My Heart |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Hello my heart I was wondering where you went But now I see you have found a home Safe in someone new Hello my heart You have been lonely so long Now you beat in lovers rhythm To a tune older than time Hello my heart I see you soaring so high Drifting on a cloud of love Anchored by faith Hello my heart I see you there in his eyes When he looks at me And softly whispers Hello my heart |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very nice piece from you. Wonderful expression with a great flow to it and the cadence is very peaceful as one reads. |
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ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
What a very pleasant read. The POV is outstanding. Very enjoyable read. Thank you AT |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Love this piece Paula. Glad that your heart has been found :-) -------------- You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face and show the world all the love in your heart Then people are gonna treat |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
A very-well written piece, Paula and flowed sp well too....brilliant piece! Nathan |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Great poem Paula! I love this one  |
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Puck Junior Member
since 2001-02-21
Posts 14Oberon's Palace |
Paula this is sheer magic, are you sure don't write for the Queen Titania. I could swear I know you from the kings court. Beautiful Paula really beautiful Have some fairy dust Iam that merry wanderer of the night I jest to Oberon, and make him smile Puck |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Mark...love brings peace and makes the words so soft and gentle...thanks ATelamon...thank you... kitkat...LOL well at least its someplace safe now...thanks Nathan...you are always so wonderful in your replies...thank you insect...great to hear from you...Ive missed you...thanks Puck...what an honour that you chose my poem to be your first post...welcome to Passions my new friend...and LOL no I write for no Queen...but Id be honoured if you would introduce me...and hey...thnaks for the fairy dust |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Paula this poem is beautiful...James |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is "soft" and I like that very much. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Hello my heart I see you there in his eyes When he looks at me And softly whispers Hello my heart' Paula, this is just fantastic! These are some wonderful lines here! I truly love this one!! sp  everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips... every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hello your heart it's so good to see you out and about and speaking your loving mind it's so kind and so upbeat and so sweet...hello your heart it's so good to hear from you.........love to ya great stuff swing it on up! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Paula--This flows like honey. Lovely write. Poeminister |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Paula, Tenderness throughout. How very sweet, well put together. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
James...so are you sweet friend...thank you Kathleen...soft is how I felt when I was writing it...thank you sp...you always say the sweetest things...thanks so much Oh ethome...what a wonderful reply sweet poet man...and Im swinging so high babes I feel like I'm touching the sky Poeminister...why thank you...what a sweet thing to say Daniel...you are kind sweet man...thank you |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
So glad you found it again. Can you ask it if it's seen mine? Hope your day is as wonderful as this poem suggests. Truly. |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
A wonderful read Paula.......  Jenn E |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Paula~ So romantic!! I just love this........so tender and loving........very happy too! SEA |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
JLR...I asked and was told your heart isnt lost at all...just hiding for a bit...hugs to you  Jenn E...so good to see your name again...thank you Sea...thank you sweetie |
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