navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #12 » Only A Memory
Open Poetry #12
Post A Reply Post New Topic Only A Memory Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
BloomingRose
Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092
Florida

0 posted 2001-02-20 07:28 PM




Only A Memory

These memories say nothing
yet scream
till silent dreams awake
where I sigh until daybreak


BloomingRose

© Copyright 2001 DebraS. - All Rights Reserved
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 2001-02-20 09:08 PM


Some memories are like that, aren't they? Very well expressed, Deb! Lovely presentation, as well!
Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
2 posted 2001-02-21 02:42 AM


In the silence sometimes the loudest screams are heard and they usually aren't the ones we seek. Wonderful and creative write my poetic friend.
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2001-02-21 09:51 AM


till silent dreams awake
where I sigh until daybreak
===============
very well done Deb...
so much expressed in perfect succinct poetic impact.
lovely presentation as well.


Love is my religion, I believe in nothing else.
To find that inspiration, live that inner vision.
Love is my religion...I believe in you.
~T Kimmel

BloomingRose
Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092
Florida
4 posted 2001-02-21 10:01 AM


Thank you Denise. I think we all suffer from some sad memories at times. Mine haunt from time to time. They never stay, thank God.

Mark~ I wrote this because I occasionally have a recurring dream about my ex-husband whom I loved dearly, and lost tragically to his drug addiction. It hurt a lot but I learned from it.
Thanks for reading, my friend.

BloomingRose
Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092
Florida
5 posted 2001-02-21 10:04 AM


Janet, I thank you for reading this, and for your kind words.

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #12 » Only A Memory

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary