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walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-02-20 03:52 PM



Your sensations cover me.
No other, one I hold.
Kiss me, mi amor.
In the loliness of time,
you reappear, sensual, and real.
Kiss me, mi amor.
You feed me hope.
Awakening, that part of my
heart that was asleep, while you were gone.
Kiss me, mi amor.
Touch me like before,
tender, fierce, like I've
picture you in ecstasy.


A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
JLR
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since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785

1 posted 2001-02-20 04:08 PM


Awakening that part of my heart that was asleep...I love this line. You have said this very well. Thanks
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2001-02-20 05:54 PM


"You reappear, sensual and real."
Very lovely...James

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