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walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-02-20 02:06 PM



I touched the sky in a
split second in the night.
When you touch me, it triggered
in me ,a whirldwind of emotions.
They explode into litle pieces in my
mind. Then they stand still, while
your breathing, takes my breath.
Our bodies immersed themselves into their
own world.
Illusion, do I grab myself on.
You take me to where I've yearned to go.
My passion, revolts against me, betraying
my self worth.Exposing me to you, who
I follow knowingly, as long as I touch the sky, again.


A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
ATelamon
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since 2001-02-06
Posts 328
Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up
1 posted 2001-02-20 02:25 PM


Ahh to touch the sky. Will leave one forever reaching upwards.

well said
AT

Lady Ollyne
Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 337
East Coast
2 posted 2001-02-20 02:38 PM


The heavens above,
touched by emotions, drawn
showers one with the glitter
of stars to light the way...

Beautiful words
beget beauty in thought

My Best to You,
Lady Ollyne


"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
3 posted 2001-02-20 06:36 PM


Love it Walker!

<*\\\><

I know not what the future holds,
but I know Who holds the future.

I don't question YOUR existance - GOD


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