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Luna's Light Of Reprieve
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Luna's Light Of Reprieve |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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Luna’s Light of Reprieve Luna’s glow emanates draping trees Giving life to its grand vitality Shadows dancing off ornamental flora Leaving mindset tasteful desire Calming mood, Luna inviting emotion Mind adrift to reprieving soul Resting place for wearisome pilgrimage Forgiveness opportunity offer’s Of-self asking turbulent why’s direction Feeling powerless to change Could I subconsciously want arduous testing? In stagnate state wandering-wondering As does Luna’s reprieving haloed glow Lift’s suns radiance power in her reining Could I possess same strengths Not perceiving acknowledgment wholeheartedly Mother Earth giving repertoire of nurturing Lessons learnt, visual advice given Letting soul heal with nature as guiding force Luna’s milder temper affording picturesque viewing Luna’s symphony plays nightly offering rewards As does calming affect of moonbeams dancing It’s a matter of choices made toward wanting inner peace and tranquillity’s power By, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I would take inner peace and tranquility's power anyday....this is a beautiful write! .. a very pure mood setting write....it was easy to travel through your perspective to get there and wonder the same thoughts as you were....take care!! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Ah, I love this Cerenity. . . it's wonderful. . .  ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Simply beautiful. I don't know what else to say. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi, Ethome,Sven,Temptress, Thank you so very much for your loving replys, I am in a writing crisis, finding subject matter harder to find, but also wanting to improve my skills as a writer, this is very important to me for some reason right now and so please be honest and any suggestions on my work feel free to comment, I really need the help and will not take offence. Love, Cerenity [This message has been edited by Cerenity (edited 02-20-2001).] |
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