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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Finality Sitting here alone, not knowing where to turn The ache in my heart slowly burns We said our final farewell last night, but is this really it? To walk away and turn our backs on what might have been You say you still love me that is why you are letting me go That you cannot be in my world any longer it is to painful to know I do not know what to feel, do or say The finality hit me like a rock yesterday I still have hope that one day we may be able to be friends Until then I will keep you safe in my heart Knowing we will never part |
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ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
Perhaps the saddest place to be is the realm uncertainty while finalized questions linger unable to be Answered Be well AT "Time is merely change. It neither enslaves nor determines us. It is instead our opportunity for self-definition" |
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Dear Heart Junior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 23Dreamland, fifth cloud on the right |
This is an absolutely wonderful and stunning piece about the beauty of love gone off. I feel for you in your sorrow and despair, for which of us hasn't sat and shuddered in the vale of tears. There is a light burning and you will indeed find it. Even if it feels right now as if you are lost. Take heart, and reach out and touch someone Reach out and touch someone Holland Dozier and Holland |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
I do not have the time right now to respond to both of you but thank you for your words of encouragement. They are greatly appreciated. Laura |
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