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Open Poetry #12

Tears of Purest Rapture

Alicat
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since 1999-05-23

Posts 4094
Coastal Texas

0 posted 2001-02-20 11:05 AM

Truncated stars once more shed
Scintillating tears of purest rapture
Upon thrice-torn asphalt gods.
We is found therein with
Supplicantal vows of vengeance
Upon our worst enemies,
The bane of ourselves:
Ourselves.
Dance we through celestial tears
Of purest rapture and self-loathing;
Abhorring emotional release
For one grainy moment of
Simply physical gratification.
And as we rend us limb from limb,
Unbounding love shall us transform
To thrice-torn asphalt gods
Upon which scintillating tears of
Purest rapture are shed once more
By truncated stars found within
Thrice-torn asphalt gods.

Alicat

“It is not the strongest of the species that survive, nor the most
intelligent, but the one most responsive to change.” Charles Darwin

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

1 posted 2001-02-20 11:12 AM

Quite an appropriate "asphalt" read as I can literally smell the tar...they are re-doing the roof as I speak...

good job!

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

2 posted 2001-02-20 06:26 PM

Wonderfully done Ali!!

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