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Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26
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Regina SK; Canada

0 posted 2001-02-19 02:03 AM



Her imprints remain
in the snow of his chilled heart,
coldness won't depart

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SEA
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with you
1 posted 2001-02-19 02:09 AM


Her silent tears fall
oh if only he could know
he was her fire

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2001-02-19 06:54 AM


in each, cold, alone
fire could come to warm hearts
footsteps lead apart

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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3 posted 2001-02-19 08:37 AM


I think it's wonderful to have that talent to write so well with so few words and still capture the wide picture....love to read it always.....take care1

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

4 posted 2001-02-19 08:42 AM


traces left behind
memories engraved in time
footprints on our souls
see how your gift inspires


As sure as God made wine
you can't wrap your arms around a memory
In the dark for me
youre the candle flame that flickers to life
~Mission UK~

Dear Heart
Junior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 23
Dreamland, fifth cloud on the right
5 posted 2001-02-19 08:45 AM


This is really good, a wonderful poem, I enjoyed it a lot

Reach out and touch someone
Holland Dozier and Holland

A Whisper's Caress
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since 2000-11-03
Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale
6 posted 2001-02-19 10:36 AM


In the darkness of lonely nights
his longing provides
her only light

Poeminister, sighhhhhh


May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

Sven
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East Lansing, MI USA
7 posted 2001-02-19 07:48 PM


once touches of warmth
filled his days and nights with love
now touches of cold

indeed, a gift that inspires. . . but one that also knows the touches of love. . .

superb. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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