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my first poem
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my first poem |
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Dennis Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 235Indiana 
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Folks, I'm not the poet in the family I never rhymed a word in my whole life but lately I've been down and sort of feeling kind of free as if maybe I could just get it right. Just give me country music and a football game to view and I'm a happy man, it don't take much but sometimes you just have to take a chance and if you do they'll either laugh or take you out for lunch! So here is my first poem, please be kind, do not critique I only learned the meaning of the word I'm happy just to read or offer my own words, so meek remember that should this be all you heard! Dennis [This message has been edited by Dennis (edited 02-19-2001).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Alright you got the first one under your belt...hope you don't end up writing poems while your driving your truck like I do when I'm driving my car...much more dangerous than talking on a cell phone or a CB...safer to pull over...James |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Welcome aboard, Dennis... and check your email for a special greeting...  |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
i think it's terrific!!! this IS a country song... nice job, dennis! welcome to the blue pages........ fun, huh? *wink* |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family!!! For a first poem, this one is pretty good! I liked it. Hope to read more from you.  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dennis...a poem is saying what's in your heart...and seems like you did that just now...good and honest...I like that..welcome! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh it's so much fun to welcome new poets....whether they think they are or not...you are here because you started looking, and viola....here we are, and here you are! Welcome poet! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Dennis, This was very nice for your first poem. I like it and you made me smile tonight when I needed it most. Thank you. You HAVE to love that country music!! Keep 'em coming!!  Welcome to Passions and I hope to see more. There are no rules on rhyming here. You can write free verse or anything!! Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats [This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (edited 02-19-2001).] |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
welcome, welcome... and oh, we are all very friendly here so dont be scared to share your words... keep writing  |
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Dennis Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 235Indiana |
Hey, thanks everyone, and I only wanted to see these gorgeous women poets that appear on these pages! And thank you, sis, for tuning me in. This is better than television any day of the week! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is your first poem??? *S* Watch out... they're addicting! *G* Great job... and Welcome! |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Deeis, Welcome to Passions, hope you enjoy your stay, the wonderful thing about poetry is its music from the heart and you sing so very well, keep on singing,,, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Dennis Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 235Indiana |
Suthern: I love southern fried chicken! Cerenity: "I wish they all could be California girls!!" Thank you , my dear [This message has been edited by Dennis (edited 02-22-2001).] |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Welcome to Passions, Dennis! You've got talent, keep 'em coming! Corinne |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Welcome I liked this.......have fun in the blue pages! SEA |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
LOL you sound like me...gimme a football game and Im happy...wonderful first write here Dennis...welcome to our world |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Dennis This was a great first post. It seems you have an audience already. Put a guitar in your hands and this would probably become music to our ears. Country Music & Country Roads take me home to the place where I belong. Welcome to Passions Garfield |
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Dennis Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 235Indiana |
gosh, I want to thank each one of you, me a country star! No way.....I wish I had my own computer at home!!!!!!!! Dennis |
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