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Kitty**
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Charlottesville,VA USA

0 posted 2001-02-18 10:26 PM



Once upon some other time...
When my life, was young and new.
I beheld this world, as a glorious place.
through bright green eyes I gazed through.

God, I was so full of life,
ready to explore, this beautiful world.
Not caring then, what the future held,
I was one happy, carefree little girl.

With each changing season, things started to fade.
The beauty was not there as before.
Impossible dreams recognized and replaced
with emptiness at my core.

My reason for being, began to plaque my mind.
I questioned this feeling inside.
What happened to that happy little girl ?
Why is it, now that she hides ?

Too many tears have dimmed my eyes.
Too many long nights spent alone.
Too many times I have been used.
And too many lies to condone.

Like a single blooming flower in the garden,
that has been trampled down by the weeds.
The beauty has faded, it can not thrive.
It won't live, for the lack of it's needs.

Like unto the flower am I.
What have I, left to glean ?
Unlike the flower, I'll live.
seeing the truth, through these eyes of green.


[This message has been edited by Kitty** (edited 02-18-2001).]

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Elizabeth
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1 posted 2001-02-18 10:34 PM


Hi there Kitty! I was just wondering when you were next going to post. Great to see you here again. I think that carefree little girl is still there...she may be hidden, but she will come out sometime when you least expect it. I loved your poem!
Kitty**
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 428
Charlottesville,VA USA
2 posted 2001-02-18 10:47 PM


HEY Elizabeth...Thanks for reading my stuff..
Had an urge tonight..LOL...
I write in spurts and when time allows. I need total seclusion to write and this is
something VERY hard to come by for me.
Anyways..I'll always be around and popping in when least expected..;-)
My best to ya..

Kitty

If you can't make it so,
you need to let it go!

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
3 posted 2001-02-19 11:27 PM


Hi Kitty,

Sometimes its hard to find our selves when life is hard but she is there, wonderful reading here.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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