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nonpoet New Member
since 2001-02-18
Posts 2 |
Being without you is a pain no one should endure it is a trivial test to make sure i'm pure time passes slowly when you're not around my smiles fade and leave only frowns nothing compares to the time we share with me just sitting enjoying you there we laugh and smile and get along great but being together is not our fate you're going away and not just for a weekend i want "us" to stay and to be a blend of not just anyone; but of you and me a blend that will make other couples see that relationships past are not like this there are none that possess permanent bliss there is one and that they'll find out when they hear me yell and scream and shout the things i love and cherish and need the things that make my loving soul bleed the ones that i dream and that float in my head the ones that i can't let become dead I need these feelings to go through my days these feelings i need to find all the ways to show you how and why i do all to be ready and willing; to be on call for you; the one that i give my best the one that is at a height above the rest as I go, I’ll leave you this I feel my best when I receive your kiss |
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Love_is_Pain Junior Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 16 |
Thats my dawg yo, sorry ur girl is goin off to college, and we'll only be JR'S...this place is tight...check ya later. Rick |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Welcome to passions new poet ...yes-a-poet  so nice to have you here... you make a cadence kissed entrance with this well expressed poem ... sincere honestly written emotions very well done. I look forward to more of your work As sure as God made wine you can't wrap your arms around a memory In the dark for me youre the candle flame that flickers to life ~Mission UK~ |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi NonPoet, Wonderful entry in to Passions, welcome, I hope you enjoy your stay and I look forward to more of this superb poetry. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
NP~ Welcome! I hope you stick around..........I'd enjoy reading more from you...... SEA |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Welcome to PIP, poet. *S* An excellent entrance... I look forward to reading more from you. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, nonpoet....by the looks of this, it belies your name, but that is OK.... and check your e-mail for a special message! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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